It may stop as hands rest
God may try his best
It is survival test

A need to know

A promise fulfilled
A genuine heart is filled
The spirit is still not killed

It is tragic
Love is till a magic
Death and life can play as music

It may stop as hands rest
God may try his best
It is survival test

who does care?
Who does dare?
Love only fare

it may still be you
it is equally true
the ordeals you have gone through

it doesn't matter
You may prove trend setter
Life tomorrow may still be better..... jadia4708au

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LaSoaphia QuXazs
This is a positive message: Life tomorrow may still be better. My saying is: Always expect the best, but take what comes, because every problem in life was caused by you and you are the only one who can overcome it. Life is a school room, where we are presented with lessons. It is not God who panishes us, but it is the Law, which is built into humanity. How we think, we get it, but it is necessary for us to learn from it. When we learned to be humble, love ourselves, so we could love others too, have only good will in us, then comes complete peace and true happiness into our life.
 
amreen
v ery nice work......well done sir
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p2u4uraqtp
I just cant shake the feeling that the last line...just wasn't what you were trying to convey. My apologizes if I misunderstood, I'm a bit sleepy. :)
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heather wilkins
love is still a magic...nice..
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carol
life tomorrow may still be better - hope
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