Catching Whispers

Walking her tight-rope
Night falls just when dawn
Puts on her eyeshades to learn how to cope.

Changes in morning occur
As light-shards invade,
Undress dark, and ignite dawn's zest further.

Glints of daylight begin
When grass shakes awake,
And breezes stir as trees start to limber.

Listen, catch whispers
Of dawn's waking yawns
As she waits at Sun's door, young and unkissed.

Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2
Beautiful Fay, as always! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing

rema renjini nair
awesome , awesome , whispers fay

 

Sally Plumb
Another beautiful piece.

sarwar chowdhury
amazing title indeed! excelent wording!

vizo meyase
wow! interesting!!! beautifully written. . .

Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2
So Lovely...A heart tender! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing

Naseer Ahmed Nasir
What a beautiful image of dawn! really beautiful, Fay. Only a good poet can catch the whispering dawn.

robertchoward
Sumptuous mood painting with perfectly blended images.

Leslie Alexis
just lovely. i loved the form and the words!!!

yelena
'Listen, catch whispers Of dawn's waking yawns' - my morning is brighter thanks to these lines:)Thanks for sharing, Fay.

Pendemic
Such beauty in the words you weave.

Sandra Martyres
This is one of your best pieces Fay - The title, the opening lines, the unfolding of the piece and finally the closing stanza are all beautiful and very touching ...

Lynda Robson
Lovely imagery Fay, dawn in all it's beauty xx

Nikunj
This is so refreshing to read through , how beautifully you have captured the night and her subtlities. This one is brilliant and each stanza is a poem in iteself here ...wow is the word

Susan Jarvis
From the title to the closing line this poem has turned my head and touched my heart. The closing line is a triumph. :)

carol
youg and unkissed marvelous fay bookmarking

Scarlett Angel
This is such a gentle piece Fay, imagery as always reaches out and draws me into the scene..thank you :)

sridevi
Beautiful..Brilliant...Amazing!!!!