That Space.
We inched towards that space today
You and I
Where lovers pace themselves before
The taste of nectar
Takes their breath away.
We dallied in some dreamy glade
And made ourselves
Stand still
To smell the longing mounting, then
Me and you
Began counting seconds 'til through
The moment's glaze
We, silent, pledged our love anew.
Munia Khan
The concluding line is just mind blowing fay....I am overwhelmed again with your magical way of expressing love~~~~~~Superb as ever ~~~~~~~
The concluding line is just mind blowing fay....I am overwhelmed again with your magical way of expressing love~~~~~~Superb as ever ~~~~~~~
Louis Rams
i could almost taste the nectar. beautifully written
i could almost taste the nectar. beautifully written
JoAnn McGrath
WOWZA...I always admire a write like this..you wonder how many different ways there really are to describe IT......and you nailed IT
WOWZA...I always admire a write like this..you wonder how many different ways there really are to describe IT......and you nailed IT
Raj Arumugam
that moment of 'before the taste of nectar' is so intensely captured here, Fay
that moment of 'before the taste of nectar' is so intensely captured here, Fay
Mike
This is so lovely and sexy, the rhymes and the understated theme reveals the perfect amount of love...
This is so lovely and sexy, the rhymes and the understated theme reveals the perfect amount of love...
carol
beautiful fay as always
beautiful fay as always
Sandra Dodd
Ah Faye this is superb. Hot but subtle, like a pot almost boiled. Hmmmm love it!
Ah Faye this is superb. Hot but subtle, like a pot almost boiled. Hmmmm love it!
Scarlett Angel
sighs with pleasure...this is breathtakingly true of those few seconds before love is consumed Fay , love it
sighs with pleasure...this is breathtakingly true of those few seconds before love is consumed Fay , love it
No better place to be in life. Everything is right.