Eastern Fragranced.
A sweetly-brushed breath of morning
greets my lips today, dawn's light-scented
touch is warm and eastern-fragranced.
Woke my hushed senses to friendship's
pleasantist way of distancing any
faraway-feel, as honey-petalled kiss
melted away grey, lifted early mist,
and let sunlight into a world-away day.
Philip
Thought your fourth line read " Woke my Husbands senses to Friendship.... One sign of that and we shall have to request you sit on the Naughty stair Fay... I like the thought of your World away day....Can I buy a ticket on line? regards Philip
Thought your fourth line read " Woke my Husbands senses to Friendship.... One sign of that and we shall have to request you sit on the Naughty stair Fay... I like the thought of your World away day....Can I buy a ticket on line? regards Philip
Frank James Ryan Jr./FjR
A freeze-frame moment within the hourglass of your keen minds-eye....and like a prism....you enable the Reader to see everything you saw as you penned this imageful jewel by way of that keen 3rd Eye! Rock-On Ms. Fay! *_____FjR_____*
A freeze-frame moment within the hourglass of your keen minds-eye....and like a prism....you enable the Reader to see everything you saw as you penned this imageful jewel by way of that keen 3rd Eye! Rock-On Ms. Fay! *_____FjR_____*
T A Ramesh
Beautiful awakening for a birth day!
Beautiful awakening for a birth day!
Ency Bearis
Beautiful lyrics to get through in a new day. Lovely.
Beautiful lyrics to get through in a new day. Lovely.
carol
a lovely morning honey petalled kisses
a lovely morning honey petalled kisses
Nikunj
Thats a nice way to greet the morning , Now I know why you need to be in west to embrace the eastern fragrance ...your verses are as grand as your morning is ...
Thats a nice way to greet the morning , Now I know why you need to be in west to embrace the eastern fragrance ...your verses are as grand as your morning is ...
Karin Anderson
The beauty you see with the breath of morning and the joy you feel resonates with me all the way to Australia. I love 'honey-petalled kiss and 'faraway feel' and 'world-away day'. Simply stunning picture too!
The beauty you see with the breath of morning and the joy you feel resonates with me all the way to Australia. I love 'honey-petalled kiss and 'faraway feel' and 'world-away day'. Simply stunning picture too!
RAJ NANDY
Fay , your poem does bring sunlight into the life of the readers along with the fresh breath of the morning ! -Raj
Fay , your poem does bring sunlight into the life of the readers along with the fresh breath of the morning ! -Raj
A beautiful poem, "warm and eastern-fragranced".