“The best thing about the future is that it comes only one day at a time.”
~ Abraham Lincoln
Give me one day...
A day
where sunrise melts your kiss
into my own
A day
where noon melds blooms of bliss
with flesh and bone
A day
where dusk lights sunset’s pledge
with flares of gold
A day
where jasmine scents night’s edge
with vows untold
A day
where twilight’s spangled stars
dust moonlit eyes
A day
whose close won’t leave the scars
of love’s goodbyes.
rema renjini nair
this is a bookmark thank you for this awesome poem
this is a bookmark thank you for this awesome poem
Simply Bono Razek
wow Susan this is absolutely gorgeous~so soft & sensual~so romantic filled ! Beautiful !!
wow Susan this is absolutely gorgeous~so soft & sensual~so romantic filled ! Beautiful !!
Patrick McFarland
Terrific poem Susan. The Lincoln quote is the perfect intro.
Terrific poem Susan. The Lincoln quote is the perfect intro.
Kate Sparrow
Ahhh, I can smell the jasmine in the moonlit night air! Beautifully penned!
Ahhh, I can smell the jasmine in the moonlit night air! Beautifully penned!
Gita Ashok
Excellent write with beautiful imagery!
Excellent write with beautiful imagery!
Abnish Singh Chauhan
Wonderful poem. Full of imagery. Use of captivating words
Wonderful poem. Full of imagery. Use of captivating words
ShyWolf
How romantic, love unfolding each day like a petal. A Gem, of beauty and grace Susan
How romantic, love unfolding each day like a petal. A Gem, of beauty and grace Susan
Patrick McFarland
Live in the moment. A beautiful Poem Susan and a lesson we should all learn...
Live in the moment. A beautiful Poem Susan and a lesson we should all learn...
Don
The marriage of photography and poetry is wonderful. I love the complexity of simple lines with strong imagery. Evocative.
The marriage of photography and poetry is wonderful. I love the complexity of simple lines with strong imagery. Evocative.
Ken e Hall
What a difference this day makes love every hour with no scars? Very well written and a gift for us to read....regards
What a difference this day makes love every hour with no scars? Very well written and a gift for us to read....regards
poeticpiers
for such a day a man woud sell his soul methinks
for such a day a man woud sell his soul methinks
William Bonilla
Thank You for sharing this beautiful written "poem" most enjoyable reading....love & peace be with you.....William
Thank You for sharing this beautiful written "poem" most enjoyable reading....love & peace be with you.....William
erik99
Yet another tender and romantic treasure, and she still manages to rhyme it so naturally and so perfectly! The imagery is very special and the technique is splendid.
Yet another tender and romantic treasure, and she still manages to rhyme it so naturally and so perfectly! The imagery is very special and the technique is splendid.
Karin Anderson
Each stunning image sits so romantically on the page making the day one of pure perfection. It floats like a dream to the finale of unscared goodbyes.
Each stunning image sits so romantically on the page making the day one of pure perfection. It floats like a dream to the finale of unscared goodbyes.
kath
You have created here a truely priceless day to treasure forever. Your imagery and rythmn melts the heart and flows into the readers mind. A flawless day from a flawless pen, again. :) Bookmarked indeed! kath xxx
You have created here a truely priceless day to treasure forever. Your imagery and rythmn melts the heart and flows into the readers mind. A flawless day from a flawless pen, again. :) Bookmarked indeed! kath xxx
Fay Slimm
Oooh - - give me that day too please Sue - -- a star-spangled verse of romance - - -and you chose the perfect image too.....
Oooh - - give me that day too please Sue - -- a star-spangled verse of romance - - -and you chose the perfect image too.....
Mike
Stunning, beautiful, perfect...
Stunning, beautiful, perfect...
Gerard Lebel
Pure magic!!............Jerry (*_*)
Pure magic!!............Jerry (*_*)
magnolia
BEAUTIFUL ! Maggie
BEAUTIFUL ! Maggie
Sandra Martyres
Rich in verse and imagery Susan..I wish you a truly beautiful and dreamy day like the one in your poem....great writing as is expected of you....
Rich in verse and imagery Susan..I wish you a truly beautiful and dreamy day like the one in your poem....great writing as is expected of you....
Leslie Alexis
that would be the most beautiful.
that would be the most beautiful.
This is lovely.