Kiss Me (A Shadow Sonnet)
Kiss, you may sometimes kiss me this way, kiss
soft nibbles in my neck’s valleys, sigh, soft.
Bliss breath deep, gently kiss my lips of bliss
waft wineberry whipped cream on my skin, waft.
Dip your finger in cream’s slow lick, groan, dip,
swill wine, wow, drench your hot lips, kiss me, swill.
Grip small ice cube in your mouth, now wide grip
thrill, pass your ice with French freeze kissing thrill.
Turn, this Sonnet’s buzzing my kiss to turn
time, mine to rest rouge lips on your neck, time.
Yearn, hum behind your ear I gently yearn,
sublime moan vibrates love and lust sublime.
Shadow, these kisses styled in night’s shadow
window, you may cheek kiss in day’s window.
Karin Anderson copyright 2010
Ken e Hall
Kissing Kissingher kind kisses simply grand ending with one on the cheek, clever words for sure...regards
Kissing Kissingher kind kisses simply grand ending with one on the cheek, clever words for sure...regards
PrEmJi PrEmJi
Song of songs.........
Song of songs.........
Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2
Karin, Wow! Do I dare try this form! This my dear is "hot" and sooooo lovely. Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
Karin, Wow! Do I dare try this form! This my dear is "hot" and sooooo lovely. Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
mamta agarwal
Karin , now with fragrance of Jasmine freshly plucked from the garden on my desk filling my room, the mood was already set for this sensuous treat. I like the way you flirt with words;uninhibited expression and vivid visuals are enough to make hormones run riot in the veins. the deft handling of form, content and the ending are awesome indeed. Honestly, i do write sonnets, but this is absolutely original and innovative. must find out more about it. Besides its raining outside. a few raindrops for you from Delhi, so what if it's cold in Australia, you are hot. love Mamta
Karin , now with fragrance of Jasmine freshly plucked from the garden on my desk filling my room, the mood was already set for this sensuous treat. I like the way you flirt with words;uninhibited expression and vivid visuals are enough to make hormones run riot in the veins. the deft handling of form, content and the ending are awesome indeed. Honestly, i do write sonnets, but this is absolutely original and innovative. must find out more about it. Besides its raining outside. a few raindrops for you from Delhi, so what if it's cold in Australia, you are hot. love Mamta
sridevi
wwooowwww Karin..i dont know how I missed this one...a lovely poetic treat!!!Delecious!!!!
wwooowwww Karin..i dont know how I missed this one...a lovely poetic treat!!!Delecious!!!!
sarwar chowdhury
great talent !!! Ammmmazing wording! Fine diction!
great talent !!! Ammmmazing wording! Fine diction!
Leslie Alexis
:). Leslie is going to try this form. :). beautiful!! and i love it!
:). Leslie is going to try this form. :). beautiful!! and i love it!
yelena
Wow, this form is really difficult for expression, but as always you managed to make it all perfectly, Karin.Thanks for sharing this shadowy piece:)
Wow, this form is really difficult for expression, but as always you managed to make it all perfectly, Karin.Thanks for sharing this shadowy piece:)
Nikunj
This is yet again a deftly written poem , you always bring forth so much with your forms and formats. this has some stunning rhyming and beautiful verses. some phrases sing to me as always ...the content is homogenous and focused , it carries softness of the kiss and sensuality of the intent , you have gone down in the depths of kissing and produced a valuable kiss for the reader here ...I liked cream's slow lick , lips of bliss and the sublime moan ....
This is yet again a deftly written poem , you always bring forth so much with your forms and formats. this has some stunning rhyming and beautiful verses. some phrases sing to me as always ...the content is homogenous and focused , it carries softness of the kiss and sensuality of the intent , you have gone down in the depths of kissing and produced a valuable kiss for the reader here ...I liked cream's slow lick , lips of bliss and the sublime moan ....
Sandra Martyres
You have done a wonderful job with this rather difficult form Karin...your talent stands tall in this magical, imaginative and sensual shadow sonnet on Kisses... Kudos to you!!
You have done a wonderful job with this rather difficult form Karin...your talent stands tall in this magical, imaginative and sensual shadow sonnet on Kisses... Kudos to you!!
Shashendra Amalshan
I felt the miraculous power of your poem working its magic through my veins. As you started to work your charm with this most sensual poem the gloomy blood cells that dictated my soul ripped to millions of shreds and a feeling of utter sensation ran through me as my veins began to dance in total ecstasy. This great and bookmarked!! ..
I felt the miraculous power of your poem working its magic through my veins. As you started to work your charm with this most sensual poem the gloomy blood cells that dictated my soul ripped to millions of shreds and a feeling of utter sensation ran through me as my veins began to dance in total ecstasy. This great and bookmarked!! ..
poeticpiers
interesting form I have no come across before
interesting form I have no come across before
sonetta
i'm not familiar with this form...wow, thanks for introducing me to it.....wonderful, just wonderful.... (that's my shadow phrase, he-he)
i'm not familiar with this form...wow, thanks for introducing me to it.....wonderful, just wonderful.... (that's my shadow phrase, he-he)
Alison Cassidy
How do you do it? Not only the limitations of line length and rhyme, but the shadow that peeps inexorably from every line!!! Congratulations on serving this shadow sonnet in such generous proportions. You scatter words over the page like petals and share your passion and lust with abandon and voluptuous images. Assonance and alliteration abound. Amazing poem! Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
How do you do it? Not only the limitations of line length and rhyme, but the shadow that peeps inexorably from every line!!! Congratulations on serving this shadow sonnet in such generous proportions. You scatter words over the page like petals and share your passion and lust with abandon and voluptuous images. Assonance and alliteration abound. Amazing poem! Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
robyn selters
Sumptuous on every level! That you managed to keep it all to a certain style shows amazing discipline with expansive creativity. Leaves one almost speechless...:)
Sumptuous on every level! That you managed to keep it all to a certain style shows amazing discipline with expansive creativity. Leaves one almost speechless...:)
Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2
I see here you know the wonder of a kiss...a sonnet tender and bursting with delicious sweet desire. Oh Yes! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
I see here you know the wonder of a kiss...a sonnet tender and bursting with delicious sweet desire. Oh Yes! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
T A Ramesh
Nice sonnet to read!
Nice sonnet to read!
Munia Khan
Now please accept a kiss from your biggest fan Karin !! Yes, that's me !! A kiss of great respect with love for composing such a beautiful sonnet.This has blown me away.Beautiful...pure romance spilling out ..love it so much:-)
Now please accept a kiss from your biggest fan Karin !! Yes, that's me !! A kiss of great respect with love for composing such a beautiful sonnet.This has blown me away.Beautiful...pure romance spilling out ..love it so much:-)
carol
oh so romantic theice one works so well great write
oh so romantic theice one works so well great write
Mike
And the easy progression from loving touch to touch in repetition feels like passion, not like form at all...
And the easy progression from loving touch to touch in repetition feels like passion, not like form at all...
Fay Slimm
A difficult shadow sonnet to write but despite this you make a kiss into a fabulous example with talented style. This builds as it leads into the ultimate song of "love and lust" Karin - - it is breathtaking and am booking this one for sure....
A difficult shadow sonnet to write but despite this you make a kiss into a fabulous example with talented style. This builds as it leads into the ultimate song of "love and lust" Karin - - it is breathtaking and am booking this one for sure....
Shadow Sonnet, seems very difficult to achieve, but you of course have made it look easy. I will try this form and am thank for accomplished poets like you who expose us to the many possibilities before us.