Not really about fishing at all, actually!!!

Fishing

Still can’t believe it.
Still reeling from the six-word shock
From a future, former friend who was never a father:

“Maybe they’re better off without you?”

Torn between being appalled
By the bite of the barb on a man-hungry meat-hook
Spliced to the end of a 25-year-friendship-breaking-strain line
And being too damn’ tired of dealing with unnecessary hurt
To bother to rise to the bitter bait,
I watched the weeds of blind judgment snag fast his fatal intent.

He cut the line without trying to loose it.
I cut my losses: no choice but to choose it.

Published June 30, 2010 Write a comment
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Kevin Wells
A poem about insensitivity of the most appalling kind and as a friend I can only imagine how hurtful that statement was - especially from someone whom you thought of as an old friend. Psychologically you have done the best thing. You wrote it out and with every word I hope a lessening of disappointment.
 
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