Regeneration. (E)

Grab my heart
while it still beats in fretful synchronicity.

It is yet yours, but before it ceases
to part with wholeness, just as it needs
to become effervescent again,
withholding forever,
reach out and take it, release, permanently,
our regeneration.

There will be no regrets on my part
of accessibility
Because I still carry your heart in mine.

Dr.subhendu kar
love is as new as gold , yet enlightens soul deeply reeling all through..

Ken e Hall
A truely FS ending to this remarkable poem which in its self jumps out and grabs you with a heart beat.... regards

john o'connell
YOUR HEART IN MINE AND MY HEART IN YOURS. THANKS FOR YOUR KIND COMMENTS.

Bob Blackwell
Romance does not age even if we do

Scarlett Angel
Your talent with poetry is shining again Fay through this lovely piece. this reminds me of my favourite poem which always touches my heart exactly as this one does.

 

M. Carter Kirk
"I still carry your heart in mine"... . Fay... sometimes i just melt when i read your poems... Yet another fantastic peice!!

Susan Jarvis
Very special, Fay, beautiful poetry with a lovely message, and the closing stanza really does reach out and touch the heart. :)

carol
a renewed love hope he takes it great write

T A Ramesh
Free poetry eases tension to read!

Sandra Martyres
A heart beating in fretful synchronicity.... poetry does not get better than this...Bookmarked for sure Fay

Philip
For A time I guess ..perhaps a second a minute ,an hour. In my heart I am forever with My Love . But still can enjoy the Poetry of others... Without doubt yours included.

Nikunj
Hmmmm. This is a sensitive , caring and touching piece , loaded with longing and sweet desires that reaffirm existence of love .