Awakenings.
From fingers of first misty light,
fresh rays
of morning shatter dark's chains
imperceptibly.
Breeze stirs daydreams as pathways
to whispered
awakenings usher in breaks of day
impressively.
Unsullied dawning displays it's own
mystical start,
gently brushing up remnants of night
imponderably.
Sleep flying away catches chance to
become partner
to challenging untried new day
imposingly.
Bob Blackwell
A gentle awakening, loved it Fay
A gentle awakening, loved it Fay
Kerry O'Connor
I always love your lyrical pieces, Fay, and this is no exception. ..chains of darkness...what an exquisite idea.
I always love your lyrical pieces, Fay, and this is no exception. ..chains of darkness...what an exquisite idea.
carol
a beautiful morning - words like magic
a beautiful morning - words like magic
Nikunj
fingers of first misty light....what a way to describe the morning phenomenon , one can almost see it happening here on this page .... Daydreams as path of whispered awakenings ...this is beyond imagination and beyond normal comprehension ...purely superlative from a poetic perspective ... Unsullied dawnings and then the sleep trying to partner the new day is well thought out concept and dreamy imagery to create a fine poem...
fingers of first misty light....what a way to describe the morning phenomenon , one can almost see it happening here on this page .... Daydreams as path of whispered awakenings ...this is beyond imagination and beyond normal comprehension ...purely superlative from a poetic perspective ... Unsullied dawnings and then the sleep trying to partner the new day is well thought out concept and dreamy imagery to create a fine poem...
Sandra Martyres
Beautiful poetry in an unusal form Fay...Unsullied dawning displays it's own mystical start, gently brushing up remnants of night imponderably. Each stanza is unique in its own way - an impressive way to describe dawn...
Beautiful poetry in an unusal form Fay...Unsullied dawning displays it's own mystical start, gently brushing up remnants of night imponderably. Each stanza is unique in its own way - an impressive way to describe dawn...
T A Ramesh
Disposal of the past and reception of new by dawn is nicely written!
Disposal of the past and reception of new by dawn is nicely written!
Raj Arumugam
good radiant lines on a new day, Fay...
good radiant lines on a new day, Fay...
very expressive and imaginative... i love it!!