We need to be complaisant compassionate lover. .....
ex silentio (from silence)
Are you not the you in you
the beloved divine spirit?
Who within you sing- I love you?
Is not that your true essence?
Are not the you fighting with you
the outsider, imposed immodest impediment?
Do you know
why sceptisim try to crash love castle?
Is not that your true essence
who fall in love spontaneously?
Was not your love prompted
by natural impulse?
Love can stop reasoning.
Do you know
reasoning can stop the love is fake?
Love bloomed first, then reason.
What caused the first cause?
‘Thinking on thinking’
is the prime mover, to Aristotle.
‘creatio ex deo’ what?
The one the God the LOVE.
Originator is He, the omnipotent!
Come to the point
When reasoning in trouble
Love comes to cure for.
No compulsion
Love can compromise for love only.
No complain
We need to be complaisant compassionate lover.
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Silence within the language is felt deeply and profoundly here. Holiness of passion felt in silence is captured beautifully in this poem. Amazing words. Extraordinary imagination.
I wrote a poem once called 'The Love is in You'. It was not nearly so eloquent as this one of yours, but the message is the same. I enjoyed your repetition of the 'you' in the first line and your skillful use of alliteration too. In am particularly interested in your use of the word 'complaisant' which many might confuse with 'complacent' (much more commonly used and has an almost opposite meaning, too). Complacent is smug or self-satisfied, where complaisant is genuinely obliging and eager to please. A complaisant, compassionate lover certainly does it for me. Beautiful, deeply spiritual poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
It is beautifully written. The "you" -external and internal you are juxtaposed against each other effectively.
A great philosophy Sarwar and it has certainly captured the hearts of your readers. Your final two lines tie the poem in beautifully. Your picture is wonderful too and the silence comes from deep within. Thank you for sharing...
ah, one cannot argue with love, love has its own logic....
I hear the true noise of silence.
Oh !! Such a lover you are !! When reasoning in trouble Love comes to cure for....shanghatik quotation ei dui line.Apni shotti ekjon boro maaper kobi.Wonderful work.
VERY WELL CRAFTED FRIEND ! THANKS FOR SHARING ! -Raj
A philosophical look at love well crafted...good write Sarwar
Well thought out and very nicely written.
Hello Sarwar, it really was great to read one of your poems after a long time. I must say you still haven't lost your poetic touch and this poem again reflects your creative brilliance. I guess Donne would be proud of you for the argumentative and logical manner in which you expressed your theme. Nice to read.
A world of Wisdom is manifested in this poem, going straight to the point with strong philosophical touched, thanks for sharing it...Love and Peace...
A great verses with the point of view, very nice.
I had a conversation with love once...the result is posted among my poems...I love what you have written here...it is my belief that the heart cannot be silent. Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
'Love bloomed first, then reason'. Words of truth.
"Love bloomed first then reason" and this is a good enough reason in itself to pursue love first - - a great verse of thoughtful composition Sarwar. Much can be gained from reading this over and again.... thank you.
Sarwar, This is a profound and well composed masterpiece of true poetry, thank you for sharing, peace be with you.....William