Fun with sounds - - some suggstions for
a title ?

Romantic candle light dinner of lovers. by Aragga

Title Please ?

OOHhhoo ooo oo oo
- - -Smile - - - -
Aaaaahhh h h h h h
Whhhoo o o o o o o
- - - Sigh. - - - --
Www w w a a ha ha
Iiii i i e e e e eye e
Hh h ho oo oo oo
- - - Moan. - - - -
Aaahh h h h h o o ooo
Hh h h h a a a aha ah
- - - Pant. - - - -
Wwwhhh h ee eee ee
- - - Gasp. - - - - -
Ww wwwh hooo ooo
Hh hhhha a aaa aaa
- - - Sigh - - - --
Hhhmmm mmmm
- - - Yawn - - - -

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Mike
How about 'Roller Coaster' sounds like a great ride to me!!!
 
Baldric
swallowing icecream!
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Sandra Dodd
Sigh, Moan, Pant, Gasp OR ahhh, whooo, hmmm Whatever you call it I luv Its a giggler
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Shashendra Amalshan
Ha ha , what a cheerful verse you have composed Fay. Hmm, hey guess what!!, I love the title suggested by Susan. 'The Aaaah to Zzzzzz of Whoopee" ha ha, that would be an amusing title to this most eccentric verse. Nice
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kath
Lol! brilliant fay! A true love song! haven't a clue what you can call it tho - I am rubbish at titles! hate 'em with a passion :) kath xxx
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Ernestine Northover
Alphabetical Indigestion!!!!!
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Raj Arumugam
A very original idea, Fay. Here are some suggestions: * I Wish * You Wish * In Your dreams, Baby! * Being in the Moment * An ABC of Love Making * The Man always goes to sleep immediately after
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Valhjim
The sounds of love are a true poem in themselves--we can only hope to hint at lovers' ecstasy and bliss by writing ciphers on a screen (or a sheet!). Good conceptual poem! Inspiring! Thanks for the ride!
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JoAnn McGrath
lets blow out the candle and fumble in the dark....
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carol
you're never too old
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carol
a sperm whale in need? lol
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Frank James Ryan Jr./FjR
Ahhh, my comment got "SENT" before i finshed saying: But cigarettes needed or not, that there be some steamy smoke up in them ther' jills, lassie !*_______FjR______*
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Frank James Ryan Jr./FjR
OW'BOUT..."PASS THE CIGARETTES"(even tho' i haven't smoked in 13 years)
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sonetta
The Bedroom Soundtrack?
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Louis Rams
in anticepation of love
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Keith Robinson
Syllables Gone Wild
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Susan Jarvis
Great fun, Fay!! As for the title, how about 'The Aaaah to Zzzzzz of Whoopee' ;)
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heterodynemind
What have you done for me lately? (just kidding) :)
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