Written to reflect the writings and philosophy
of Deepack Chopra, which I have long endorsed.....
Colours of Splendour.
Small
withering spores of an ageing subsistence
quickly grow rank, and smell
with decay
But colours of splendour choose to resist
thinking old,
they smoulder in permanent rays
Of juvenile wonderment,
not just alive
but vibrantly so, webs of fine ether
Hold them
suspended in time,
reliable
dynamic force runs right through,
aims lethal
Darts at anything other than youthful
aptitude
for energy's hold on mindful
Delight,
because everything built upon truth,
being ageless,
looks brand new all the time.
Tinted
with unseen universal love
Happiness
aids old outlooks recover.
Ernestine Northover
How right you are with all you say in this poem. Wonderful explanation, so well produced and presented. A delight to read. Thank you.
How right you are with all you say in this poem. Wonderful explanation, so well produced and presented. A delight to read. Thank you.
kath
Oh Fay! A perfect poem at just the perfect moment! Here was I, feeling a bit old and worn and your beautiful words have lifted me above worldly fears and concerns and brought me alive with enthusiasm once more. Thank you so much for this rejuvenating, exhilarating, deeply truthful write! :) kath xxxxxxxx
Oh Fay! A perfect poem at just the perfect moment! Here was I, feeling a bit old and worn and your beautiful words have lifted me above worldly fears and concerns and brought me alive with enthusiasm once more. Thank you so much for this rejuvenating, exhilarating, deeply truthful write! :) kath xxxxxxxx
yelena
'But colours of splendour choose to resist thinking old, they smoulder in permanent rays Of juvenile wonderment..' - my favourtie lines. A poem full of colours and love for life.Thanks for sharing, Fay:)
'But colours of splendour choose to resist thinking old, they smoulder in permanent rays Of juvenile wonderment..' - my favourtie lines. A poem full of colours and love for life.Thanks for sharing, Fay:)
Mike
This Cheepak guy sounds OK... :)) I love this poem... so alive and vibrant!!!
This Cheepak guy sounds OK... :)) I love this poem... so alive and vibrant!!!
JoAnn McGrath
your youthful colors remind me of dandelions and how the young gravitate to picking them because of the color
your youthful colors remind me of dandelions and how the young gravitate to picking them because of the color
Raj Arumugam
colorful lines in an insightful poem...color and energy and mind-youth certainly go together
colorful lines in an insightful poem...color and energy and mind-youth certainly go together
Karin Anderson
I too am an admirer of Deepack Chopra. An excellent philosophical poem Fay with vibrant color splashed from your palette of youth.
I too am an admirer of Deepack Chopra. An excellent philosophical poem Fay with vibrant color splashed from your palette of youth.
Susan Jarvis
Colourful and beautiful. :)
Colourful and beautiful. :)
T A Ramesh
Truth based on joy is indeed ageless and delightful!
Truth based on joy is indeed ageless and delightful!
carol
colors are ageless and a grand delight
colors are ageless and a grand delight
Nikunj
Yes ...I connect to this . this is timeless , ageless and awe inspiring ...strokes of time and reality make everything that's farce whither away in the wind but the youth and the very idea of it , stays alive all the time ...like that beam of light that chase the dark away .....
Yes ...I connect to this . this is timeless , ageless and awe inspiring ...strokes of time and reality make everything that's farce whither away in the wind but the youth and the very idea of it , stays alive all the time ...like that beam of light that chase the dark away .....
This is a meditation I am sure Deepak would treasure. The words can't block the light shining here. You are a wonderful writer.