Untried Dimensions.
Shall we pluck intensity from the air ?
and perhaps coil it soundly and
extravagantly into a petal-soft bed
of rarely seen dreaming,
where sheets of silk make textured
messages into sequinned bliss
with rainbowed moonbeams ?
Shall we take flight, you and I ?
Untried dimensions wait to take us far,
to make morning metaphors,
and catch sight of bliss
made for our breakfasting bed.
Let us capture euphoria
to feel more elation, and when
glorious sun enters,
rapturous untamed passion
shall paint light on the face
of our embrace leading to ecstasy.
Shall we make haste then to taste eternity ?
Nikunj
Superlative imagination and amazing creativity , the verses have a serene depth and consume the reader right from the first syllable....Morning metaphors ...is such a sweet thought .
Superlative imagination and amazing creativity , the verses have a serene depth and consume the reader right from the first syllable....Morning metaphors ...is such a sweet thought .
Simply Bono Razek
Ooo very romantic Fay !
Ooo very romantic Fay !
Kesav V Easwaran
life could be any time on the dawning stage of love- be whatever your age...all you need is a mind to perceive love; and a willing heart to give and take...glorious write, Fay...romantic and sweet
life could be any time on the dawning stage of love- be whatever your age...all you need is a mind to perceive love; and a willing heart to give and take...glorious write, Fay...romantic and sweet
Mike
So pretty soft and sexy... a great combination that flows like a love dream...
So pretty soft and sexy... a great combination that flows like a love dream...
tony jolley
Love the use of the questions to the reader. You may give your answer, Fay, but you leave us more than enough room to consider ours first then compare it to yours. A very nice device that! Beyond this, the poignancy in the last line is just sumptuous. Loved it. One from your top drawer..... Tony
Love the use of the questions to the reader. You may give your answer, Fay, but you leave us more than enough room to consider ours first then compare it to yours. A very nice device that! Beyond this, the poignancy in the last line is just sumptuous. Loved it. One from your top drawer..... Tony
carol
fantastic i will certainly go
fantastic i will certainly go
Susan Jarvis
Fay, this is exquisite...graceful, seductive and oh, so romantic. Very special indeed. :)
Fay, this is exquisite...graceful, seductive and oh, so romantic. Very special indeed. :)
Nikunj
This is like tasting eternity through your verses and metaphors ... 1. Plucking intensity from air and repackaging it : it is indeed innovative and imaginitve to the core , blissful to read through and pleasing the inner self , touching that chord with in that produces a timeless muse ... 2.capturing euphoria is such a roamntic statement that elates the soul ... wow is the word ..Fay . This is bookmarked ...
This is like tasting eternity through your verses and metaphors ... 1. Plucking intensity from air and repackaging it : it is indeed innovative and imaginitve to the core , blissful to read through and pleasing the inner self , touching that chord with in that produces a timeless muse ... 2.capturing euphoria is such a roamntic statement that elates the soul ... wow is the word ..Fay . This is bookmarked ...
A striking poem about making love. My favorite lines are: "Untried dimensions wait to take us far,/to make morning metaphors". To "taste eternity" has a slight echo of Emily Dickinson. My poem "You're Lying There Still Asleep" deals with the same theme.