Another fun-poem about punctutation..... written after
an invitation from Raj Arumugam.

Very Upright.

I am your very upright, short
Exclamation mark - ! ! !
but please note
You get out of control mostly
With me ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
when I ought
To be used wisely you dote
On my form, ! ! ! ! ! !
and seem caught
Up with my simple-to-tote
Over thin waist-line, ! ! !
and brought
Close to the point of a boast
I exclaim "I am here " !
so please to vote
My punctuation good marks,
overwrought
You may be but use me
to re-coat
Your inane remarks ! ! !
the more haughty
I am the better I sound !
so do post
Me around for extra force
Use my emphasis ! ! !
I load the quotation
You use ! ! ! !
I am your line- fortress ! !

So forget you were taught
To stifle my horn !
I sound throaty
So blow me ! ! !
My punctuation
Will add to your thought !

Published June 23, 2010 Write a comment
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tony jolley
Neat! But I still wish I could get my Masters students to go 'easy' with them - they get everywhere: even in consultancy reports and analyses!!!
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sonetta
ha-ha, exclamation points.. can you imagine a world without them?!?!?!?!
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carol
lolol!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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dennis go
!!!!! Wonderful !!!! :)
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Linda Winchell
GREAT!!!!! LOL
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Liliana Negoi
:)))))))))) i was so tired when i clicked on this one and i suddenly found myself laughing :)) thank you for a lovely read and for wiping away my tiredness :))
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Ernestine Northover
Applause! Applause! Etc., etc., etc., !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Sandra Martyres
A very cool piece Fay...enjoyed your take on the use and the abuse of the not so humble exclamation marks!!!
 
Mark L. Berryann
A crafty and very much enjoyed poem!
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