Never to Awaken

In their silvered wish,
My eyes can see farther than time allows,
And slow hands can touch a farther shore
And praying, there gently open doors
That a kiss still breathe
Where later futures die,
In the static-charged sky;
And into quiet depths,
Old dreams may bore,
To live out their lie-
Then awake, no more.

yelena
And then we will dream away into eternity leaving sorrows and burdens behind... Beautiful, Patti.

sonetta
this is so beautiful, esp. when recited out loud.....1st 4 lines are just magnificent....

Shashendra Amalshan
Very well penned verse heterodynemind. I loved these lines “a kiss still breathe where later futures die”. I noticed an undercurrent note of despair or anxiety which touches the reader’s heart. Very nice to read

carol
awake no more signifigant line

Sandra Martyres
"And into quiet depths, Old dreams may bore, To live out their lie- Then awake, no more." A rather wistful write with a sadness that is very touching...