Fun love-poem - -- written in conjuction with this classic-car image.
Running Low.
Half-juice in my battery.
Electrics are shorting.
How long can I take this.
My gas running low.
Come to my rescue.
Inject some love-input.
This engine will fail
Without that I know.
Come polish my body.
Supply lubrication.
Red classics need passion.
Then watch power flow.
Leslie Alexis
beautiful use of metaphor and it works perfectly!!! :). wonderful!!
beautiful use of metaphor and it works perfectly!!! :). wonderful!!
Kevin Wells
Great metaphors, showing us all that you are red hot - even with onlyhalf juice in your battery!
Great metaphors, showing us all that you are red hot - even with onlyhalf juice in your battery!
Scarlett Angel
lovely descriptive piece Fay with a cheeky note running straight through it ...love it :)
lovely descriptive piece Fay with a cheeky note running straight through it ...love it :)
Gerard Lebel
"Fill 'er up, please!!" lol... loved it, Fay
"Fill 'er up, please!!" lol... loved it, Fay
sarwar chowdhury
very powerful and beautiful diction dear Fay!
very powerful and beautiful diction dear Fay!
kath
lol! Vroom! Vroom! Fay! This lovely witty poem simply must have a four "stroke" engine! :) kath xxxxxxxxxxx
lol! Vroom! Vroom! Fay! This lovely witty poem simply must have a four "stroke" engine! :) kath xxxxxxxxxxx
carol
definitely a mechanic or plumbers are good too lol
definitely a mechanic or plumbers are good too lol
Ho-ho, super