Waiting.
Still seeped in desire,
I fire at the sound of your name.
Revived juvenile
Thrills excite me , over-rated
Common sense combines
With total infatuation.
No reason or rhyme
Can help me stay sane, you remain
My obsession, timed
To possess me, I hang fated,
And waiting, I resonate.
Evenings Ebbing Tide
Infatuation and obsession are both things that cause insanity, so beware! Good write Fay.
Infatuation and obsession are both things that cause insanity, so beware! Good write Fay.
RAJ NANDY
True dear Fay , old memories make the heart resonate ! Beautiful poetic lines I must say ! -Raj
True dear Fay , old memories make the heart resonate ! Beautiful poetic lines I must say ! -Raj
carol
when you feel the emotions well no longer hanging
when you feel the emotions well no longer hanging
T A Ramesh
Very interesting waiting it seems in the game of love!
Very interesting waiting it seems in the game of love!
Keith Robinson
That innate part of us that totally shuts down our rational self...
That innate part of us that totally shuts down our rational self...
Kerry O'Connor
A poem filled with passion.
A poem filled with passion.
Your poem and picture are both seeped with the color red of desire. Revived juvenile memories are full of energy and longing. You have drawn me into the beauty of your poem and the picture.