Wishes and Dreams.
I want to sip the summer showers,
to fill a room with fairy cakes,
sit neck deep in a field of flowers,
and dip my toes in sparkling lakes.
But I know, when I sleep tonight
my dreams aren't going to come out right.
I'll sit and sip a field of flowers,
my toes dipped into fairy cakes,
my room will fill with summer showers
while I'm neck deep in sparkling lakes.
Cat
fun poem, mine too always turn out backward too.. Good writing, Cat
fun poem, mine too always turn out backward too.. Good writing, Cat
Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2
A warm, wonderful verse that tickles my heart. Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
A warm, wonderful verse that tickles my heart. Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
LightH2O
So inspiring, like the "fairy cakes" and I can picture the field of flowers. Recommended!
So inspiring, like the "fairy cakes" and I can picture the field of flowers. Recommended!
Shaun
Lovely words with perfect rhyme and meter..
Lovely words with perfect rhyme and meter..
wombat
A perfect mix of joy and sadness in my book. Wombatxxx
A perfect mix of joy and sadness in my book. Wombatxxx
patspoems
Great fun poem Kath and the imagery made me laugh out loud. Lovely..... Pat
Great fun poem Kath and the imagery made me laugh out loud. Lovely..... Pat
Dr.subhendu kar
flower flounces sipping joy shower serenades by spark in lakes night sleeps in lap of darkness dream is just spake of mortality
flower flounces sipping joy shower serenades by spark in lakes night sleeps in lap of darkness dream is just spake of mortality
shanmugam
yes, nice words, the last two lines!
yes, nice words, the last two lines!
Gerard Lebel
A delightful read!! hehehe Amusing for sure but so well written!!
A delightful read!! hehehe Amusing for sure but so well written!!
Chaos1214
Hey! When life gives you lemons, take 'em down to the pub and and drop the slices in your rum & coke : P
Hey! When life gives you lemons, take 'em down to the pub and and drop the slices in your rum & coke : P
Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2
Such a lovely poem...a treasure true. Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
Such a lovely poem...a treasure true. Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
Patrick McFarland
No more mushrooms before bedtime for you young lady... LOL Enjoyed this one immensely!
No more mushrooms before bedtime for you young lady... LOL Enjoyed this one immensely!
hydromedusa
First verse mystical and charming, then the last verse clever and made melaugh out loud - so well written I had a visual! Ingenious!!
First verse mystical and charming, then the last verse clever and made melaugh out loud - so well written I had a visual! Ingenious!!
Keith Robinson
Ha! Great twist! Had me laughing...
Ha! Great twist! Had me laughing...
Susan Jarvis
Oh, Kath, I love this...from the delicious dream of the opening stanza, to the warning of the middle couplet to the whimsical wit of the closing verse. You just keep getting better!! :)
Oh, Kath, I love this...from the delicious dream of the opening stanza, to the warning of the middle couplet to the whimsical wit of the closing verse. You just keep getting better!! :)
JoAnn McGrath
lol...sounds like a normal dream to me....lol....i don't sleep anyway and if I take something to sleep then I wake in the morning finding things I have done in the night and don't remember...seems I wrote a poem the other night right here online...it was garbled but I could make some of it out....I love your humor here
lol...sounds like a normal dream to me....lol....i don't sleep anyway and if I take something to sleep then I wake in the morning finding things I have done in the night and don't remember...seems I wrote a poem the other night right here online...it was garbled but I could make some of it out....I love your humor here
it's sweet and real..this is how sometimes our dreams and wishes are twisted, twarted, mixed, misplaced etc..