Save Me.
Abandoned to myself, solely,
High-spritednesss shrinks.
Unattached and unattended
By all but deep
Discontent, solitude
Strangles elation, decapitates
And stamps on vitality.
Disempowered by
Night's endless hours
I resolve to pray
"Save me from languidity"
Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2
Your words, tap dancing on my heart! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
Your words, tap dancing on my heart! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
kath
A deep and melancholy write on the downside of solitude - wonderfully paced and cram packed with perfectly chosen words "Discontent, solitude/ Strangles elation, decapitates/ And stamps on vitality" - inspired Fay! :) kath xxxxxxxx
A deep and melancholy write on the downside of solitude - wonderfully paced and cram packed with perfectly chosen words "Discontent, solitude/ Strangles elation, decapitates/ And stamps on vitality" - inspired Fay! :) kath xxxxxxxx
eddie chavez
this is really good!
this is really good!
Evenings Ebbing Tide
It sounds like you have things to sort out in life so as to gain more contentment? Great write with such feeling!
It sounds like you have things to sort out in life so as to gain more contentment? Great write with such feeling!
Fay Slimm
Purely from imagination, this poem describes loneliness experienced by some, and as Sandra says self-pity can take precedence.
Purely from imagination, this poem describes loneliness experienced by some, and as Sandra says self-pity can take precedence.
Sandra Martyres
"Save me from languidity" -lovely end to a very serious poem that wallows a bit in self-pity ...
"Save me from languidity" -lovely end to a very serious poem that wallows a bit in self-pity ...
carol
by writing this you just saved yourself good write
by writing this you just saved yourself good write
you are sharing, instead of bottling up and that's wonderful. The impact of words used, for a second nailed my heart to the wall of my chest.