Moon Parade.

I chased this evening
Evening's fading sunset clouds,
Silver tin-foiled ribbons, tied
To grey-as-granite filigree.
Tinted skirts of hazy
Daytime's late farewell,
Night's ballooning moon parade
Displayed pale firework-light
Invasive coloured swathes
Across the best forgotten
Rainy afternoon.
June's foothold sparked scuffs
Of steel in dust cascades
Across the waning light
While I stayed chasing.

Ken e Hall
You display in words the wonders of heaven cos thats whats up there near the moon and you never let us down with your parade...cheers...regards

Simply Bono Razek
A masterpiece of beauty !

Kerry O'Connor
Just beautiful fay

RAJ NANDY
FAY , you have become a master in painting beautiful canvas with your exquisite words ! -Raj

Karin Anderson
With such beauty you have described Fay, I would chase the Moon Parade too! The 'ballooning moon, silver tin-foiled ribbons and tinted skirts of daytime's late farewell' are just some of the images that leave me in complete and utter awe!

carol
chasing for the night excellent

kath
What an atmospheric poem Fay! No pen here, I swear you have used a paintbrush, with skill and great imagination! An artist indeed. kath xx

Scarlett Angel
Such a dreamy descriptive piece Fay it just drifts along through each line.lovely:)