counting blessings senryu.
My vision cleared.
The sun shone and I could see
how lucky I am.
patspoems
Lovely Kath depicting how precious our sight is, I loved it....Pat
Lovely Kath depicting how precious our sight is, I loved it....Pat
Floreann Cawley
This is simply beautiful..Floreann
This is simply beautiful..Floreann
Floreann Cawley
Wonderful write..Floreann
Wonderful write..Floreann
Gerard Lebel
How lovely... Perfect senryu!!
How lovely... Perfect senryu!!
seema chowdhury
Wonderful and positive. thanks
Wonderful and positive. thanks
spbsdude
When the sun shines on our souls and brightens our path, then indeed we can see more clearly just how lucky we are. Very nice.
When the sun shines on our souls and brightens our path, then indeed we can see more clearly just how lucky we are. Very nice.
Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2
Ah! Very nice...an eye opener...! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
Ah! Very nice...an eye opener...! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
Patrick McFarland
So uplifting and inspirational. Few haiku's or senryu's can accomplish what this one manages to do. Excellent!
So uplifting and inspirational. Few haiku's or senryu's can accomplish what this one manages to do. Excellent!
ju
:) so easy to get wrapped up in grey clouds. love this one.
:) so easy to get wrapped up in grey clouds. love this one.
Ben Gieske
What a nice new day for you thanks to the sun helping you see yourself.
What a nice new day for you thanks to the sun helping you see yourself.
samanyan
that's a beautiful senryu on the inner awakening
that's a beautiful senryu on the inner awakening
Fay Slimm
Tenderness fills in the spaces of this little verse. Positve throughout Kath..... lovely.
Tenderness fills in the spaces of this little verse. Positve throughout Kath..... lovely.
Not only is it never too late, but no time is ever better than the present : )