I Am Caught.
Between the devil
and the deep
blue peace
in the sea
of thought
surrounding you
I am caught,
and drift
endlessly.
yelena
Just perfect, Susan.
Just perfect, Susan.
Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2
Oh Yes! I couldn't have said it better...lol...love it! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
Oh Yes! I couldn't have said it better...lol...love it! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
Keith Robinson
Nice take on "being taken"...very pretty Fay.
Nice take on "being taken"...very pretty Fay.
Frank Lambert
This has a nice easy feel to it, one you can read and read again. Enjoying all the while. I think I'm caught there too...
This has a nice easy feel to it, one you can read and read again. Enjoying all the while. I think I'm caught there too...
Pendemic
Pleasing to read and stirs the mind. Great piece.
Pleasing to read and stirs the mind. Great piece.
carol
excellence is had to find but i have found it bookmarking
excellence is had to find but i have found it bookmarking
Sandra Martyres
Nice way to be caught Fay.....a very original write
Nice way to be caught Fay.....a very original write
JoAnn McGrath
A siren must have lured you there....and captured you unaware...nice little piece I like how it its laid out.... little waves
A siren must have lured you there....and captured you unaware...nice little piece I like how it its laid out.... little waves
Kerry O'Connor
I love this, Fay. Each line leads to something unexpected.
I love this, Fay. Each line leads to something unexpected.
drifting endlessly on a wave of love