Through Fingers
Quite
fulfilled,
breathless
they lay there
both harmlessly
measuring shadows
through fingers,
their limbs
lathered
in sated
carnality.
sonetta
althou the picture is surely of sand or earth, i'll pretend it's brown sugar and say, this poem is finger-licking goood....!
althou the picture is surely of sand or earth, i'll pretend it's brown sugar and say, this poem is finger-licking goood....!
JoAnn McGrath
I love terse writes that say so much and this one does!
I love terse writes that say so much and this one does!
carol
well written very senuous
well written very senuous
Susan Jarvis
What a potent and erotic poem, Fay - 'lathered in sated carnality' is a master touch. :)
What a potent and erotic poem, Fay - 'lathered in sated carnality' is a master touch. :)
Kerry O'Connor
Each line holds an image which leads effortlessly to the next. I like the shape of this poem.
Each line holds an image which leads effortlessly to the next. I like the shape of this poem.
Robert Ross
Primal and totally hot!
Primal and totally hot!
Carl Harris
This is a beautiful described sensual poem, Fay, capturing the image presented like a Hasselblad camera! Wonderful write! Carl.
This is a beautiful described sensual poem, Fay, capturing the image presented like a Hasselblad camera! Wonderful write! Carl.
'Lathered in sated carnality' - is the poetic icing on the cake of this understated and beautifully crafted poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥