Love's Sweet Needs.

Later my love we will mingle with twilight.
Wander
through woods
that secrete our delight.

In a short while we will dine by candlelight.
Sample
wine's juices
which keen passion's bite.

After a time, we will sit in dim firelight.
Warm
love's sweet needs
and await coming night.

Then we might walk by the lake in cool moonlight.
Hollow
a grass patch
to ease lover's plight.

At last we will bed, in deep feathered starlight.
Yield
to desire then
when love feels just right.

Simply Bono Razek
remarkable write Fay~tender & so romantic~

Philip
Pretty Prose, Pretty Lady, as Pretty as any picture words can Paint. Pretty-booming -good Dear Fay. Yes Pretty - blooming - good !

 

Lillian Susan Thomas
I especially love the dreamy quality you created in this poem.

Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2
A twilight seranade, truly beautiful! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing

magnolia
Beautiful, love it. Maggie x

Karin Anderson
Fay, you have set hearts racing with this stunning poem that is romance at its very best. The deep feathered starlight really did it for me as the feathers of a bird are so romantic when they fluff up. Mmmmm can I be a feather on the wall?

RAJ NANDY
The last stanza creates a befitting climax to this lovely poem ! -Raj

C. P. Sharma
Fay, here you are romantically cozy. I loved it. cp

Fay Slimm
Of course you may Ron - - with the greatest of pleasure - - glad you liked it and hope your sweetheart will too. - only the ageless keep love alive. - -- Fay

Ron Peat
This is a wonderful love poem Fay. Can I copy it and send it my wife? A love smitten old man that still loves his sweetheart. A poet friend//RH Peat

Romeo Della Valle
Wow! Fay, you made me feel like ROMEO IN PARADISE, what a lovely and romantic poem... The essence of love vividly presented in this poem...Excellent...Keep it up! Love and Peace...

Susan Jarvis
So tranquil, romantic and beautiful, Fay, and I adore the cosiness of that 'deep feathered starlight'. :)

JoAnn McGrath
oh I love this one but can't say why....:O)...but then I already did....didn't I....:O)

kath
Aw Fay, this is an ahh for the heart. A song for the soul and for love. A perfectly phrased lyrically delicious melody. Bookmarked. Kath xxx