Heaven Sees.

If hearts hunger
for love
then Heaven sees.

Need opens approach,
chance appears
for release.

Heavens's intentions
will brook
no delays.

Freedom to show love
is how
Love repays.

Shriram Sivaramakrishnan
the poem is structured neatly...but the first three lines seem a bit disjoint to me...something seems missing...like a connector....but otherwise the poem as a whole is very good

Pumpkinspice57
This is very beautiful. Loved it! Pumpkin:)

jadia4708au
love need not pay, but create a way, have little say,and you may have divine ray .. lovely poem

Simply Bono Razek
amazing ~such softness these beautiful lines project...

Kevin Wells
How lovely! This is heart-warming. Really nice.

C. P. Sharma
Soft and silken - Lovely love life's treasure trove. I loved it. CP

kath
a gentle and love filled, heavenly poem Fay. I adore it! kath xxx

Susan Jarvis
The opening stanza is heart touching, and the closing one so full of wisdom, and those in the middle, just lovely. A poem to warm the soul. :)

carol
fay this is just wonderful

Philip
What Do I know...A simple Male ? Well all I know is that this is Good. Oh Yes Fay , very,very good ! Trust me as a poet who knows Truth . Kind Regards. Philip

Karin Anderson
Oh! Yes Fay this is so true! When we open the divine within ourselves sums up your last stanza perfectly. So wonderful to have you back dear Fay. love Karin