Wake-Up Call.
The comforting warmth of another
breathing alongside,
closed eyes,
gliding
over waves
of sensuous dreams,
covers
askew with content
sonerous sighs.
Competing with first birdsong at dawn
palls a little
when wet lips
and cold nose lather your face
in wake-up call.
Puppies never sleep where they are told.
carol
lol puppies are so lovable and fun their wakeup calls can never be ignored
lol puppies are so lovable and fun their wakeup calls can never be ignored
Susan Jarvis
Utterly adorable, from the charming picture to the closing line, and I especially like those ' sonerous sighs. Competing with first birdsong at dawn'...as for the 'wet lips and cold nose' I can feel them, and I love them. :)
Utterly adorable, from the charming picture to the closing line, and I especially like those ' sonerous sighs. Competing with first birdsong at dawn'...as for the 'wet lips and cold nose' I can feel them, and I love them. :)
RAJ NANDY
There are Doctors who advice to keep a dog or raise a puppy as a stress buster ! Dogs remain as devoted and true companion till the very end with their self-less love! I liked the cold nose wake up call very much ! -Raj
There are Doctors who advice to keep a dog or raise a puppy as a stress buster ! Dogs remain as devoted and true companion till the very end with their self-less love! I liked the cold nose wake up call very much ! -Raj
Frank James Ryan Jr./FjR
You had me going, you clever scribe....and completely in the wrong direction no less.... that is 'til the final lines...Inventive & most enjoyable, as always, young lass!\\\FjR
You had me going, you clever scribe....and completely in the wrong direction no less.... that is 'til the final lines...Inventive & most enjoyable, as always, young lass!\\\FjR
Karin Anderson
So very captivating Fay and imagery to die for! 'gliding over waves of sensuous dreams' did it for me and he looks as snug as a bug in a rug. A wake-up-call indeed as I try to make the decision to get another pet!
So very captivating Fay and imagery to die for! 'gliding over waves of sensuous dreams' did it for me and he looks as snug as a bug in a rug. A wake-up-call indeed as I try to make the decision to get another pet!
wombat
A perfect Sunday Morning read! I showed it to my Jack Russell who went straight back to bed.
A perfect Sunday Morning read! I showed it to my Jack Russell who went straight back to bed.
JoAnn McGrath
AW.....that is the most adorable puppy picture...just like kids...never get to sleep in
AW.....that is the most adorable puppy picture...just like kids...never get to sleep in
Pendemic
Our pets are treasures from above and remind us every chance they get! What a beautiful expression.
Our pets are treasures from above and remind us every chance they get! What a beautiful expression.
sonetta
this is so cuuute...if i could only have one to wake me up in the morning instead of an alarm clock!
this is so cuuute...if i could only have one to wake me up in the morning instead of an alarm clock!
Fay, I don't keep pets but I love this puppy and this poem tempts me to keep one...but who will care of...I need someone to take care of me, lol. Anyways, I enjoyed this poem. CP