The Moon Whispers
My posture plays with the moon's glow
It traces my every move below
Obscure are my thoughts in this shadow of mine
Illusions in darkness trail behind
The Man in the moon follows my every step
Helping with what I need to accept
He whispers so softly that I almost don't hear
'Tell me your troubles... I will be here for you dear'
Nikunj
Nice poem , tracing that fade shadow and drawing imaginations outta it ..its a sweet meaningful piece . brevity is the soul of wit ....
Nice poem , tracing that fade shadow and drawing imaginations outta it ..its a sweet meaningful piece . brevity is the soul of wit ....
rema renjini nair
great ambience and feel... lovely
great ambience and feel... lovely
Karin Anderson
And there is a man in the moon I can see and admire how he can sooth your subconscious. I love the originality of this poem JoAnn.
And there is a man in the moon I can see and admire how he can sooth your subconscious. I love the originality of this poem JoAnn.
mistycalpoet
excellently penned my dear Joann..i see it more than beyond widening my imaginary mind... the moon embracing the sun protecting... <3
excellently penned my dear Joann..i see it more than beyond widening my imaginary mind... the moon embracing the sun protecting... <3
Valhjim
Moonlight and motion combine in this beautiful poem, very suggestive and imaginative. A pleasure to read!
Moonlight and motion combine in this beautiful poem, very suggestive and imaginative. A pleasure to read!
Gerard Lebel
A most enjoyable read, JoAnn.
A most enjoyable read, JoAnn.
Michael J. Gale
Nice poem about the man in the moon JoAnn. The moon sits still high in the sky...Never moving,by the by. Only shifting when it's orbit calls...Only so that,it will not cease floating,to fall.
Nice poem about the man in the moon JoAnn. The moon sits still high in the sky...Never moving,by the by. Only shifting when it's orbit calls...Only so that,it will not cease floating,to fall.
albeej
A nice terse, well-written poem That in some measure reminds me of A poem of mine titled “Star Stuff.” Your moon reveals who you are Which is more important than what You became…a fine poet.
A nice terse, well-written poem That in some measure reminds me of A poem of mine titled “Star Stuff.” Your moon reveals who you are Which is more important than what You became…a fine poet.
countryfog
Sun-shadows are only the shape of us, but moon-shadows somehow reveal who we are inside , the shapes and shades of desires, regrets, fears . . . all the things that we keep hidden in the light of day come shimmering forth at night in a soft luminosity that is not just the reflected light of the moon but the illumination of our spirit.
Sun-shadows are only the shape of us, but moon-shadows somehow reveal who we are inside , the shapes and shades of desires, regrets, fears . . . all the things that we keep hidden in the light of day come shimmering forth at night in a soft luminosity that is not just the reflected light of the moon but the illumination of our spirit.
ron flowers
I really like this.
I really like this.
Frank James Ryan Jr./FjR
Majiqual....Or perhaps Reality in Lunar-Motion ! Either way...ya' gotta like this poem...and this scribbler likes it fine !\\\FjR///
Majiqual....Or perhaps Reality in Lunar-Motion ! Either way...ya' gotta like this poem...and this scribbler likes it fine !\\\FjR///
That first line is catching and a nice play between the moon's actions and your thoughts.