Woman Is Only My Slave Name
Woman is only my slave name
I am much more
I am your worst nightmare
Or your best friend
I'll give you my whole branded mind
Or just a piece
But with a light touch of your tongue
running from my toes to my ears..
lingering a little longer
in the blue petals in between
I will say more in a sigh
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Sandra Dodd
Wow Dorothy Parker meets Elizabeth Barret Browning. Sis boom ba wowza from "Drop it like it is hot, cause it is JoAnne McGrath"
Wow Dorothy Parker meets Elizabeth Barret Browning. Sis boom ba wowza from "Drop it like it is hot, cause it is JoAnne McGrath"
Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2
Delightfully something special...Ah Yes! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
Delightfully something special...Ah Yes! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
Melvyn Mohan
beautiful....
beautiful....
C. P. Sharma
But you tame the Shrew, lol CP
But you tame the Shrew, lol CP
Ron Peat
Could you put that in a blender and ship it? Is there a renewal fee? I love the part about the "blue petals in between" Now is that cobalt or ultra-marine? That title is just delicious; does it come in any other flavors like butter-brickle or almond crunch? Oh when you mail it; skip the burnt hamburger. I like well done, but I'm not fond of burnt. Too much of the barbecue in it for this gladiator. Now that's one long tongue and one well spoken of here; is that from a giraffe by any chance? Personally I like tongue boiled and with horseradish as well. It's great in a sandwich, the Earl told me 'bout it. I have my own bread. This is great sounding stuff. Send it to the Colosseum in Rome for William Spearpoint. This is a class act like a Dagwood and I can dig it. A Poet friend// RH Peat
Could you put that in a blender and ship it? Is there a renewal fee? I love the part about the "blue petals in between" Now is that cobalt or ultra-marine? That title is just delicious; does it come in any other flavors like butter-brickle or almond crunch? Oh when you mail it; skip the burnt hamburger. I like well done, but I'm not fond of burnt. Too much of the barbecue in it for this gladiator. Now that's one long tongue and one well spoken of here; is that from a giraffe by any chance? Personally I like tongue boiled and with horseradish as well. It's great in a sandwich, the Earl told me 'bout it. I have my own bread. This is great sounding stuff. Send it to the Colosseum in Rome for William Spearpoint. This is a class act like a Dagwood and I can dig it. A Poet friend// RH Peat
Michael J. Gale
Love,is love to love. Great read here-JoAnn.
Love,is love to love. Great read here-JoAnn.
Susan Jarvis
Simply perfect - you have captured the essence of a woman beautifully in this dream of a poem. :)
Simply perfect - you have captured the essence of a woman beautifully in this dream of a poem. :)
Karin Anderson
Ah! Imagery to die for and I sigh that says it all! A double sided coin with the gold head winning over a grim tail.
Ah! Imagery to die for and I sigh that says it all! A double sided coin with the gold head winning over a grim tail.
countryfog
The paradox that is woman . . . at least to us men. You really should submit this to some contests, it's as good as anything I've read in a long time.
The paradox that is woman . . . at least to us men. You really should submit this to some contests, it's as good as anything I've read in a long time.
Fay Slimm
Wow - -this sizzles JoAnn - - hard and hitting where only truth can - - a captivating read.
Wow - -this sizzles JoAnn - - hard and hitting where only truth can - - a captivating read.
Frank James Ryan Jr./FjR
This was better than Lincoln's Gettysburgh Address ! HAH (~;.........This impessive & provicative work touches on multi-emotional reaction,....Emancipation, Procuration & Sensual Conotation...The structural movement is smooth, crisp, and tightly wovwn...and the piece overall... a pleasure of a read ! JoAnn, you've nailed down another pen-gem, young lady!\\\FjR///
This was better than Lincoln's Gettysburgh Address ! HAH (~;.........This impessive & provicative work touches on multi-emotional reaction,....Emancipation, Procuration & Sensual Conotation...The structural movement is smooth, crisp, and tightly wovwn...and the piece overall... a pleasure of a read ! JoAnn, you've nailed down another pen-gem, young lady!\\\FjR///
Mike
I think I'm a slave to love as well... :)
I think I'm a slave to love as well... :)
carol
this is so lovely
this is so lovely
Steve Twydell
A Tulip, or Venus fly trap ? :-) lol. loved this JoAnn, A passionate message !! Thanks for sharing......Kind regards,,,,,,Steve.
A Tulip, or Venus fly trap ? :-) lol. loved this JoAnn, A passionate message !! Thanks for sharing......Kind regards,,,,,,Steve.
nimal dunuhinga
Fantastic! Yes, a Woman's sigh carries everthing.
Fantastic! Yes, a Woman's sigh carries everthing.
This is very good