Total Bullshit? Yes, But Say It Again!
It felt unnatural
showered with sweet words
bathed in compliments
drenched in verbal affection
tears flowed and I hid
Total bullshit!!!
I do not care
Tell me more
say it again
wash my soul with sweet nothings
I weep at the hearing
Uncomfortable in my mind
but my soul craves more
my heart wants to believe
every syllable
Sweet words are like a stranger
I feel danger
curious
wonder
why I had never heard them before?
Pendemic
Too many days spent in darkness makes one not know how to acknowledge the light. Excellent write and so true to the mark.
Too many days spent in darkness makes one not know how to acknowledge the light. Excellent write and so true to the mark.
poeticpiers
As long as you recognise the bullshit why not enjoy it
As long as you recognise the bullshit why not enjoy it
Ron Peat
A grand poem, it reminds me of a poem I have called pleading for thunder. The empowerment of words here is really something spectacular to read. The irony is so forceful and deep with imagery along with suggestions. I really like this work Sandra. I'm going to book mark it.
A grand poem, it reminds me of a poem I have called pleading for thunder. The empowerment of words here is really something spectacular to read. The irony is so forceful and deep with imagery along with suggestions. I really like this work Sandra. I'm going to book mark it.
Frank James Ryan Jr./FjR
A stranger perhaps because it be something you have not been accustomed to receiving from that someone who has not shown you their very best side in a very long time. ....People do , or rather CAN change...If they truly deem it important & necessary to do so.The ability is there, but one must heed the wake-up call that they obviously received & that resulted in their sudden change for the better & then committ to making a concerted effort with their partner/friend/whoever, to see if these reaching branches of potential re-growth may once again bare sweet fruit.Very fine work, Sandra indeed !\\\FjR///
A stranger perhaps because it be something you have not been accustomed to receiving from that someone who has not shown you their very best side in a very long time. ....People do , or rather CAN change...If they truly deem it important & necessary to do so.The ability is there, but one must heed the wake-up call that they obviously received & that resulted in their sudden change for the better & then committ to making a concerted effort with their partner/friend/whoever, to see if these reaching branches of potential re-growth may once again bare sweet fruit.Very fine work, Sandra indeed !\\\FjR///
wombat
Very realistic, well done. Happens to the best of us (ONLY). Pleasant read indeed. H
Very realistic, well done. Happens to the best of us (ONLY). Pleasant read indeed. H
Trust can be hard coming until you can embrace the true wonder you are...yourself! Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing