Haven't written anything in a while, so here's my newest poem! I might edit it later, just wrote it now in a few minutes...

Time

One thing I know - time is hollow.

Everybody has time -
time to live,
time to give,
time to rhyme.

But nobody can own time -
you can't grasp it, feel it,
you can't save it in a bank,
and get interest bit by bit,
hoping it'll be there when you become blank.

Time is merely a medium for memories.

erik99
Some have said that a poem, like a painting, is never finished, merely abandoned. The difference is that when you rewrite a poem you can't see what you've rubbed out!

 

t.ravindran.
sure.you said it right.time is simply a mdium one can live,plan.kill,enjoy etc. nice poem. ravi

sarwar chowdhury
Time means- the Forces moving caused by expansion of universes. Nice write indeed!

C. P. Sharma
So, if I have to live, I must live upon this bank and shoal of time.

Susan Jarvis
There's a quote that says; 'Don’t count every hour in the day, make every hour in the day count' - and your poem serves as a wonderful reminder of just that. :)

Steve Twydell
Time is but a count down of life !!! Loved this Julia, don't think it needs any editing reads great as it is. A very accurate take on life........ Thanks for sharing......... Kind regards........ Steve.

 

poeticpiers
Time is merely a convenience or inconvenience according to your perception of it