Irresolution.
Motionless
with
patient lust,
he
stands
panting.
He knows
he
must move,
but she
still
sleeps.
Bob Blackwell
Ha Ha, I wonder how long he waits, shortish poem but I can imagine the waiting would not be too long, maybe the hidden verse is longer?
Ha Ha, I wonder how long he waits, shortish poem but I can imagine the waiting would not be too long, maybe the hidden verse is longer?
Romeo Della Valle
Short becomes long and long becomes short, Fay, you said all in short! Excellent, Love and Peace...
Short becomes long and long becomes short, Fay, you said all in short! Excellent, Love and Peace...
Shashendra Amalshan
Ha ha, very passionate poem FAY . You make the reader pant for more, reading this poem was an exciting experience and I loved it a lot (take care Fay, with love/Shan)
Ha ha, very passionate poem FAY . You make the reader pant for more, reading this poem was an exciting experience and I loved it a lot (take care Fay, with love/Shan)
Alison Cassidy
Succinct as a haiku with a fine dusting of erotic wit. Delightful poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
Succinct as a haiku with a fine dusting of erotic wit. Delightful poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
Munia Khan
If love is the food,lust must be the appetizer...at least I think that way!!! Love this poem so much Fay and love the image as well.Wonderful.
If love is the food,lust must be the appetizer...at least I think that way!!! Love this poem so much Fay and love the image as well.Wonderful.
Leslie Alexis
A millennium or two I'd wait... because, I love you! that what it say. wonderful poem!
A millennium or two I'd wait... because, I love you! that what it say. wonderful poem!
sonetta
lust can't wait...but love can.... :)
lust can't wait...but love can.... :)
Sandra Martyres
You say so much in so few words...great write Fay
You say so much in so few words...great write Fay
What a word painting.. :)