*Last 2 lines are lyrics from Jethro Tull's song called, "Locomotive Breath."

~Lizzie's Boyfriend

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She holds a short handled axe
so gently behind her back.
With her warped sense of humor,
her fun is a heart attack.

She says she really loves him,
as he listens to Jethro Tull.
She says she has one problem,
she can't get it through his skull.

"He hears the silence howling
catches angels as they fall..."







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Louis Rams
i like this one, and the flow that you've created and the locomotive breath. ha- ha great write

Lynda Robson
Very cleverly written, love it !!

carol
bye boyfriend love your humor

Philip
Clever Clever Written Prose, You are a Clever Poet. Bravo ! Chop away !