.sunbathed by jkostavaras [120.000 views]

Satisfaction.

Glass-topped still water lies calm
under sun.

Taking the baking of afternoon
heat.

I lie still too in a state of
euphoria.

He has been here, and he left me
replete.

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Mike
OK... Now I have a whole new definition of replete... I knew there was a reason I loved that word!!!
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RAJ NANDY
A great composition to read in this 41 degrees of Delhi hest ! -Raj
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heterodynemind
Aww, I just love swimming..in another's love. This is perfect.
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Shashendra Amalshan
it is too short Fay. I felt I wanted more.. lol. Having said only few are capable of writing creative verses with such economy of words. Very nice to read!!
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JoAnn McGrath
oh.....little said and lots left to imagination and mine can run wild on this one....well done
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sonetta
ahhh! replete..complete...euphoric!!
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Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2
It is always a pleasure to read your beautifuly poetry. Dorothy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
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