Walking on Air.
Surprised that a life-change
enhances my mood,
Blue appears bluer in
mid-morning sky.
Sea takes on colour that
no water should.
Thoughts become free as
they luminous, fly.
Remembered no longer
unhappy regrets
A presence now near creates
high from low.
Mood-change today spins
soft textured velvet
As more mem'ry-tunes of fine
rhymes birth and grow
My walking on air may not be
understood.
But relaxing again helps life
to feel good.
RAJ NANDY
Your poem indeed has a relaxing effect upon the reader ! Thanks ! -Raj
Your poem indeed has a relaxing effect upon the reader ! Thanks ! -Raj
Alison Cassidy
Tell me Fay, did the picture inspire the poem, or did you just happen to find one perfect for your piece? You have certainly captured that feeling of lightness that a relaxed spirit brings and the easy metric beat enhances the flow of the poem. Freedom abiding. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
Tell me Fay, did the picture inspire the poem, or did you just happen to find one perfect for your piece? You have certainly captured that feeling of lightness that a relaxed spirit brings and the easy metric beat enhances the flow of the poem. Freedom abiding. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
Frank James Ryan Jr./FjR
Fay Slimm! You git' yer'self down off that cloud right now...One patch of sumo-cumulous, and you'll be pennin' yer' next gem with the earwhigs at Mt.Calvary! Not a bad picture to leave on tho ,i guess !Splendid Work,lass....Commenting from a public library, i am, as my P.C. is in the O.R. on life support...Don't know if or when, but hopefully i will & soon......be back, that is.....FjR
Fay Slimm! You git' yer'self down off that cloud right now...One patch of sumo-cumulous, and you'll be pennin' yer' next gem with the earwhigs at Mt.Calvary! Not a bad picture to leave on tho ,i guess !Splendid Work,lass....Commenting from a public library, i am, as my P.C. is in the O.R. on life support...Don't know if or when, but hopefully i will & soon......be back, that is.....FjR
Louis Rams
when you are in love, you should always feel like your walking on air, for you found someone with that love to share.so feel free to float on cloud nine, for now you have the love and the time.
when you are in love, you should always feel like your walking on air, for you found someone with that love to share.so feel free to float on cloud nine, for now you have the love and the time.
lxdollarsxl
such is the beauty of love
such is the beauty of love
carol
breathe on me too relaxing is something most dont do
breathe on me too relaxing is something most dont do
heterodynemind
Oh I hope it's catching, Fay! Breathe on me, breathe on me, with your beautiful writing. :)
Oh I hope it's catching, Fay! Breathe on me, breathe on me, with your beautiful writing. :)
Susan P. Bagley
Loved it! Been there, done that.:)
Loved it! Been there, done that.:)
sonetta
you're walking on air, walking on sunshine, walking on cloud nine.....keep walking!!
you're walking on air, walking on sunshine, walking on cloud nine.....keep walking!!
What a splendid feel to this write Fay. You definitely know how to capture the moment!