Best Tested Love.
Love is not love until tested
severely
with deep argument's heat,
until beaten with weakest excuses,
or scorched with remorseless
disbelief.
Untested love takes for granted
a life predetermined with
success.
but the strongest, the best
in tested love
will accept that defference
keeps it fresh.
Leslie Alexis
its like gold passed through fire. wonderful lady fay
its like gold passed through fire. wonderful lady fay
Carl Harris
Your expressive poem is clearly written from experience, Fay, and your words ring as true as the great bells in Big Ben's clock tower. Any love can sail on a smooth sea, but it is when the winds blow, the waves thunder, and the rocks perilously close, that true love shines in it's finest moments. Your lovely poems expresses that so well. Carl.
Your expressive poem is clearly written from experience, Fay, and your words ring as true as the great bells in Big Ben's clock tower. Any love can sail on a smooth sea, but it is when the winds blow, the waves thunder, and the rocks perilously close, that true love shines in it's finest moments. Your lovely poems expresses that so well. Carl.
RAJ NANDY
I do remember someone saying that if you really love me , you must learn to accept me as I am ! The same thing can be said about great friendship ! I loved Ken's comments the most ! Thanks Fay ! -Raj
I do remember someone saying that if you really love me , you must learn to accept me as I am ! The same thing can be said about great friendship ! I loved Ken's comments the most ! Thanks Fay ! -Raj
Orlando Belo
What a wonderful poem!
What a wonderful poem!
Susan Jarvis
So true, Fay, and so eloquently and beautifully conveyed - this is fine poetry with purpose, and it pays to listen to the message. :)
So true, Fay, and so eloquently and beautifully conveyed - this is fine poetry with purpose, and it pays to listen to the message. :)
Ken e Hall
strong point here well presented....lovers will always fight ,but will enjoy their differences when they turn out the light.regards
strong point here well presented....lovers will always fight ,but will enjoy their differences when they turn out the light.regards
carol
beautiful thought
beautiful thought
Sandra Martyres
but the strongest, the best in tested love will accept that defference keeps it fresh. Very memorable closing lines Fay....
but the strongest, the best in tested love will accept that defference keeps it fresh. Very memorable closing lines Fay....
stevenstirk
Deep thought and a sound basis for the truth which you poetically express. It is lifes challenges, defeats, and disagreements that shall ultimately provide the test, and pull us closer together. Anything less than this is merely 'apple pie and ice cream' love
Deep thought and a sound basis for the truth which you poetically express. It is lifes challenges, defeats, and disagreements that shall ultimately provide the test, and pull us closer together. Anything less than this is merely 'apple pie and ice cream' love
All the Puppy so called love in the world should feel ashamed in front of your "Best Tested Love"...A very meaningful wonderful prose Fay.Very deep.Love it.