Across the Bay by Steve Slimm

Pictures of Poetry.

Words can weave
Beautiful pictures of dreams.
Use them.

Thoughts are the means
Used to sculpture the words
Into beautiful pictures of dreams.
Don't abuse them.

Ideas evolve themes
That energise thoughts
Used to sculpture the words
Into beautiful pictures of dreams.
Peruse them.

Moments set scenes
Whereby ideas evolve themes
That energise thoughts
Used to sculpture the words
Into beautiful pictures of dreams.
Don't lose them.

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heterodynemind
Love this! Feels revolutionary.
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RAJ NANDY
FAY , A LOVELY THOUGHTFUL AND MEANINGFUL POEM ! -Raj
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Alison Cassidy
What a gorgeous poem! Reminds me of one of those children's stories that grow, page by page - like the House that Jack Built, or On the First Day of Christmas. And the subject of your poem and the grace of the writing certainly add to its appeal. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
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Pendemic
Fay you are on top of your game with this exceptional write! This is not only beautifully done, it is the process we all go through to create pictures of poetry.
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Andrew Blakemore
A very well structured poem and beautifully written. Excellent work Fay.
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ron flowers
I love this one. I especially like your stanza ending lines, almost a poem in themselves.
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andrasidan
A true credo to live by, if your intention is the literary one. Love the rythm and the ease with which you breathe your thoughts here. Love the painting too. Have you painted it?
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carol
a grand poem you've covered it all quite well
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Sandra Martyres
Fay you write marvellous poetry effortlessly....this one captures beautiful moments meant to be treasured....just lovely work. Thanks
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stephen
to put moments into words, who would abuse something so....wow?
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