Passionate Living
Life is unstinted, and nobody lacks.
Trusting the universe
we need not fear.
Black holes can be healed
and never come back
To disturb or depress, and change will appear.
Love fills gaps with spirited life,
which gives
Good reason for feeling passion,
allied
To excitement, life becomes sacred, sieving
Reasons,
love exists to give, and by this, fired.
Love has wisdom for finding ways through.
Those who refuse fear or anger
find freedom.
We are enough,
and should crave no approval,
Thus we can begin to honour our needs.
We deserve to feel ardour, risen above
Being needy we can grow,
and reach out
Help others show courage
in powers of love,
Passion for living is what life is about.
Alison Cassidy
Your final line is worth preserving. It was Qentin Crisp, I think, who said 'instead of searching outside for more things, look within in case you've missed a buried treasure.' You share truth and compassion with confidence and style in this passionate poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
Your final line is worth preserving. It was Qentin Crisp, I think, who said 'instead of searching outside for more things, look within in case you've missed a buried treasure.' You share truth and compassion with confidence and style in this passionate poem. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥
T A Ramesh
The end sums up everything about life! Nice!
The end sums up everything about life! Nice!
Frank Lambert
That passion is indeed what life is all about. As you've vividly conveyed in this verse and once again expressed the part love has to play in life.
That passion is indeed what life is all about. As you've vividly conveyed in this verse and once again expressed the part love has to play in life.
Shashendra Amalshan
Hello Fay, In-fact I was in a very depressing mode when I turned to your page. As a matter of fact I have exams in a week. The case is, generally I make a problems out of trivial incidents and mess up my life .. To add more, when exams are week away, life becomes even more depressing and hectic, lol... Ha ha, enough about my pathetic situation, as for the poem I must say it is a very moral boosting poem. When a artist creates an art, what matters most is the effect it can create on the viewer or the reader in this case... I must say, this type of poem is ideal for any one who is feeling bit sour and dull... Your words are filled with vibrant positive energy that can enlighten the reader's heart.. Good one
Hello Fay, In-fact I was in a very depressing mode when I turned to your page. As a matter of fact I have exams in a week. The case is, generally I make a problems out of trivial incidents and mess up my life .. To add more, when exams are week away, life becomes even more depressing and hectic, lol... Ha ha, enough about my pathetic situation, as for the poem I must say it is a very moral boosting poem. When a artist creates an art, what matters most is the effect it can create on the viewer or the reader in this case... I must say, this type of poem is ideal for any one who is feeling bit sour and dull... Your words are filled with vibrant positive energy that can enlighten the reader's heart.. Good one
Sandra Martyres
Great one for the morale Fay...The last stanza says it all "We deserve to feel ardour, risen above Being needy we can grow, and reach out Help others show courage in power of love, Passion for living is what life is about"
Great one for the morale Fay...The last stanza says it all "We deserve to feel ardour, risen above Being needy we can grow, and reach out Help others show courage in power of love, Passion for living is what life is about"
Leslie Alexis
Ah.. positive and positive and positive. A wonderful poem! very very effective piece.
Ah.. positive and positive and positive. A wonderful poem! very very effective piece.
Your positive vibes just life me high into the sky of possibilities. Trusting the universe and believing 'black holes can be healed' and bring about change really makes this such an inviting poem. So much wisdom in this entrancing poem Fay.