Love in need of attention gives results such as these.
Incomplete Circles.
Always gyrating, deplete , and in need,
Some relationships zigzag between circuits
Of incomplete circles, which rotating, feed
Spirals that sweep out of sphere, hurting
Participants, breaking resolves, such curves
Of pivotal lack, which by-pass high vortex,
And lap, weak in unfinished orbits, swerving
In detours around uncaring shortages
Are deficient arrangements, commitment
To defective want reaps yearning turned bitter
Ezna Stephna
Beautiful poem with its picture on display.you are very creativity poet. incomplete circles brings countless meaning in life.superb !
Beautiful poem with its picture on display.you are very creativity poet. incomplete circles brings countless meaning in life.superb !
Patrick McFarland
Loved the poem as well as the pic. Very creative Fay!
Loved the poem as well as the pic. Very creative Fay!
cyclopseven
I am lost for words...such a completeness in this incomplete circles:).
I am lost for words...such a completeness in this incomplete circles:).
Marion Friedenthal
Once I could focus after looking at that psychadelic pic, I found a poem that describes the intricasies of relationships very well. Especially like: Commitment to defective want reaps yearning turned bitter...
Once I could focus after looking at that psychadelic pic, I found a poem that describes the intricasies of relationships very well. Especially like: Commitment to defective want reaps yearning turned bitter...
Philip
This Poem deserves and gains my attention Fay. I like this style you have to bring to the fore the un-expected.
This Poem deserves and gains my attention Fay. I like this style you have to bring to the fore the un-expected.
Susan P. Bagley
Deep. Thought provoking. I agree with Gone For Good, it sounds like Rap, but Amazing Rap!!! Interesting, satisfying.
Deep. Thought provoking. I agree with Gone For Good, it sounds like Rap, but Amazing Rap!!! Interesting, satisfying.
Karin Anderson
Amazing picture and words to make me dizzy with awe! You are certainly making up for lost time Fay and WOW!
Amazing picture and words to make me dizzy with awe! You are certainly making up for lost time Fay and WOW!
Sandra Dodd
Wow! What a departure from your other works I have read. Love it! ( trippy pic too) Look forward to reading anything you write Faye.
Wow! What a departure from your other works I have read. Love it! ( trippy pic too) Look forward to reading anything you write Faye.
I can relate to this, mine sort of zigzagging in incomplete circle but love prevails for I have found my woman!