Be Careful

Be careful of close auditoriums
And thick stanchioned stadiums
Watch out for iron gussetted doorframes
And bar covered windows
For your loneliness will trap you there
Backed up against the steel barriers
And probe your trembling thoughts
With it's dark truncheon.

Stay away from mirrors
Which can reveal your state of solitude
Automobiles which will show your inertia
Rollercoasters which can skitter you into the past
Without so much as a roll-bar
And arms, perhaps most dangerous of all-
Just before nightfall.

Sandra Martyres
I will be careful of all Patti - excellent penning Patti with many memorable lines...

Kerry O'Connor
Those last two lines really crunch down on bone. Great piece, Patti.

Pendemic
Primal paranoia! Deep write, loved the expressions.

carol
warnings i will heed

Mike
I'm looking over my shoulder now...