Love Will Live.

Part of a permanent, love
does not alter after a time.

Hurt will not break it,
nor parting or pain.

Nothing will change it,
spacially pure, love will stay.

After I've gone you will find
in my rhymes love will live on.

Simply Bono Razek
oh this is a wonderful poem Fay!..when I go I pray that Zaher can read my poetry & still feel my love as "alive" as it is this day....then.

ron flowers
And indeed it does. A very good one, Fay.

sonetta
so true....love is indeed eternal....and poetry proves it poignantly...

Alison Cassidy
You're right Faye, love will live, no matter what. Your final couplet is a reminder to all of us scribes that immortality is ours for the penning. Truth penned eloquently and without too many words. Love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

 

Baldric
A mega byte of poetry , from a fertile mind, a million words and phrases, from one so refined, her words of love are endless, as are waves upon the sea, and she puts them on poetry freak, for all of us to see.

ron flowers
Simply beautiful.

Karin Anderson
A very special poem Fay and the experiences of life only enrich it if is true love.

Bob Blackwell
Words written with love will surely last

carol
lovely fay as only you can

stephen
beautiful write. poetry is but written emotions and binding it with love creates eternal art.

Leslie Alexis
o how true.

samanyan
love will live on in your rhymes...beautiful write

Philip Kirkland
Love is all you need ! Beautiful

heterodynemind
Really enjoyed the depth of feeling in this.