This is a short poem that just came to me. I talks about how I wish society won't classify me as an illiterate adolescent but just simplily adolescent because being young is beautiful and I am an intelligent youth.
So I hope you enjoy
Rose
Trust
I'm tired of you scrutinizing me as
the immature baby
still being fed by the beast
connected to mommy's chest.
I'm tired of you identifying me as
the idiotic ignorant illiterate child
who still doesn' t clearly comprehend
the true meaning of
Responsibility.
Please, Please,
I'm begging you please
trust that my
Adolescence lessons lessens
the legend of lifeless dreams
Trust that I'm destined to dominate
determination
demonstrating dedication
to loving myself first
Trust that my faith in your
devotion in me is believed to be
Everlasting
Trust that my adoration for you is
more that my adoration for life itself
Trust that my image is flawlessly flawless
above every flawless thing in heaven
Trust in me.
By,
Rose
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Standing up to be heard, to be strong. Good write.
Hi Rose ! Let this young bud bloom to become a beautiful rose ! But even the rose learns to live with its thorns ! -Raj
The frustrated tone definately comes through. there were a couple of clumps (would that be the right word) of alliteration that seem to express your ability to articulate, thus proving your point of intelligence.
TRust in yourself that you can overcome all trials... being young and beautiful ( and intelligent) you have a future ahead of you dear! Welcome, write more to express yourself to the world!
Hi, welcome to the poetfrek project! // tom
well written, brilliant