Camera Pics 06- 02- 10 117 by Fay Slimm

No Real Goodbye.

Soul needs no eye, soul images lie
nearer than sight.

Thought has the means to invoke
thought, without hands.

Heart, calling softly to heart, can
without ears be heard.

Mind easily maps nuance of shape,
to bring other to mind again.

Spirit approaches to breach spiritual
parts of a waiting half.

In making a whole each will know
as the making occurs.

Wordless and soundless union sates
need for union even at distance.

For true soul-mates, there becomes,
in truth, no real goodbye.

Published February 26, 2010 Write a comment
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Ken e Hall
You cement the feelings into our hearts ...yes the vibration of love from the soul can never be stilled....excellent write regards
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Dorothy A. Holmes apwlts2
You have said it all so well! Dorothhy A Poet Who Loves To Sing
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Bob Blackwell
So true, love never dies it goes with the flow of life to carry on......intruth there are nor real goodbyes. Thsi really is a Wow!!! poem Fay. Thank you
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stephen
wow. what a gift it must be to have ones heart owned by such an artist. such love shines not only on the two but on all around them, forever and always. thanks for the tan.
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samanyan
that is beatiful...read my 'joy of the whole'
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Raju Baruah
beautiful ... silent
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lxdollarsxl
exceptional
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Karin Anderson
So profound Fay a knowingness of each other and as Sally says telepathy. This is poetry of brilliance Fay.
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Sandra Martyres
Fay this poem is beyond what Any words of mine can say... It encompasses wisdom, philosophy and a lot more...suffice it to say it is a piece of poetic brilliance.
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stevenstirk
That's wonderful Fay . It has almost a flavour of the far east and an educatice core of wisdom.
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Leslie Alexis
ah.. fay.. I am going to act my age and say, " Yo, this is Hype!"
 
Idris El Ashsa
Oh,saying what can be in ordiary sentiment in an extraordinary sublimity.Which means can't be said by other than a strong poet.This is real poetry.I envy you.
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Ernestine Northover
So true, so true. A sweet poem and a joy to read it.
 
Sally Plumb
Telepathy?
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marvinbrato
Great piece of poetry... profoundly romantic expression!
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Frank James Ryan Jr./FjR
This work smacks with a sweetly air of Ancient Orientel philosophics, with a Contemporary modification, of course... and i'm liking it just fine, young lady... It is abstruse,and demands more than 1 nread...but it is in the actual breaking down of each couplet that will enable the reader to detect the grand nexus of "Forever Love" that you so eloquently link for the reader to bond with & appreciate. And the message this reader has received here is that "Forever Love" can be demonstrated via the Non-Palpables as much as the palpables. Excellent Penning,Fay... F j R
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T A Ramesh
The ending is true for soul-mates!
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Sandra Dodd
Faye not everyone could write this, you have to have walked it. Beautiful and worthy of higher praise than a my comment can give.
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