Questions of Love

Went your day well?
Did the bluebird I sent land on your shoulder
and flutter my love-filled
wishes to you for a colourful bouquet
of successful schemes?

Went your sleep well?
Were your nightime dreams lit with the stardust
I ordered, and did my love warm
every corner of your caring
heart until dawn?

Went your work well?
Did the sunbeams I sent for appear, did they play
gently around your labour to persuade
daytime to lighten your workday load
with heightened moments?

Went your evening well?
Did you miss gray morning showers I parceled
up tightly from early skies that by eventide
only fine sunset remained to send
rainbowing arcs of inviting fire
to ignite our love ?

Went your day well?





Fay Slimm

sonetta
i think the answer here is a resounding yes!

Karin Anderson
Wow! What a magical poem this is with such glorious images to bless its success as a great love poem. It is all so romantic and written for someone so very special....

Linda Ori
How could it not? Your lovely verse has brightened and colored it beautifully! And I had some interesting dreams, as well - perhaps influenced by this superb poem!

Pendemic
My day went very well, after receiving this charming gift of a poem. Thank you for sharing.

Ernestine Northover
I should jolly well think that they should have Fay, with all those gifts you so kindly sent . What a great poem, I really, really enjoyed reading this one. A real charmer.

Leslie Alexis
It just got better. :). wonderful

Naseer Ahmed Nasir
Lovely poem, Fay, especially the last stanza is very beautiful.

carol
ou ignited love the day went well

David Taylor
Overflowing with love, beautifully expressive..