Advice for the frustrated.
Explicitly Taking Action.
Necessitating relished relief,
appreciating
Partiality, the female penchant
For propriety fails
miserably when availing
Self
of appetizing sex , and recording
How vital femininity
depends on certain need.
Evaluating
timely satisfaction
In concentrated climax,
she knows she will succeed
Only
if it is she who takes action.
wombat
A fine poem indeed and the deed must be considered fine and satisfying as well simply because it is. There is a cleverness in here that must have come to you spontaneously since it seems so uncontrived. Splendid. Hx
A fine poem indeed and the deed must be considered fine and satisfying as well simply because it is. There is a cleverness in here that must have come to you spontaneously since it seems so uncontrived. Splendid. Hx
Frank Lambert
This sounds like good advice... Please ensure you pass it on to every woman who is likely to come into contact with me... lol I'm kinda surprised to see you writing this, but I shouldn't be really. It's a perfect image too.
This sounds like good advice... Please ensure you pass it on to every woman who is likely to come into contact with me... lol I'm kinda surprised to see you writing this, but I shouldn't be really. It's a perfect image too.
stevenstirk
I loved it . I don't think it's risque' as it is so well written and almost possesses a certain decency in the style and delivery . Boundaries are there to be pushed, doors are there to be opened . I admire your writing, and your style in putting it on. I have many pieces which I believe contravene my own safety zone. There are two pieces in particular that I have never shown for fear of being categorised as something that I'm not. They are not sexual, but more about religeon and race. I would value your opinion in particular. Nope, I loved this Fay. Regards Steve
I loved it . I don't think it's risque' as it is so well written and almost possesses a certain decency in the style and delivery . Boundaries are there to be pushed, doors are there to be opened . I admire your writing, and your style in putting it on. I have many pieces which I believe contravene my own safety zone. There are two pieces in particular that I have never shown for fear of being categorised as something that I'm not. They are not sexual, but more about religeon and race. I would value your opinion in particular. Nope, I loved this Fay. Regards Steve
Vincent Turner
as Carl stated below, this is indeed a vivid write, you had me blushing there for a minute!!! this is strong evidence of how versatile your writing can be. regards vincent
as Carl stated below, this is indeed a vivid write, you had me blushing there for a minute!!! this is strong evidence of how versatile your writing can be. regards vincent
Carl Harris
This is indeed a vivid write, Fay, as well as a very well written and expressed poem. Although men do not always like admit it, there is nothing wrong with a woman taking the initiative in a relationship or affair. Your poem indirectly suggests several scenarios, but I liked how you avoided getting into detail in this fine poem. Carl.
This is indeed a vivid write, Fay, as well as a very well written and expressed poem. Although men do not always like admit it, there is nothing wrong with a woman taking the initiative in a relationship or affair. Your poem indirectly suggests several scenarios, but I liked how you avoided getting into detail in this fine poem. Carl.
Does the internet count as contact? Almost afraid to commnent for Faye Slimm has the poets all stirred up, especially Frank. Hot Faye just one word HOT!