Spinning Stardust.
Fairytale stories roll off golden pens
As airy and fanciful minds start curling
Over the edge of unreal, to write again
Ideal dreams, woven with gossamer words,
Spun in fine-lined phrases, capturing reason
And turning it into ethereal rhyme.
Where knights always win fair favours to please
Their ladies, and ride stallions nightly
To bliss, kiss virgin love, win battles repeatedly
And deliver honour besides; such as this
Poets scribe, and as many artful dreams
Leave their mark on pages, readers would miss
Imagery, mystically spun , and trusting
The heart between the lines they catch the stardust.
Michael J. Gale
Magic golden pens ink,well stories to no end of the imaginational journey,abroad. Great poem Fay! God bless the poet,and all their imaginations,run wild-MJG.
Magic golden pens ink,well stories to no end of the imaginational journey,abroad. Great poem Fay! God bless the poet,and all their imaginations,run wild-MJG.
carol
beautiul fay catching stardust
beautiul fay catching stardust
Carl Harris
Your wondrous imagery in this delightfully exquisite poem was a pleasure to read, Fay. As always, your exceptional poetic phrasing gave eloquent voice to your heart's emotions and that magnificient final line was the icing on this quite delicious and aethestic poem. Carl.
Your wondrous imagery in this delightfully exquisite poem was a pleasure to read, Fay. As always, your exceptional poetic phrasing gave eloquent voice to your heart's emotions and that magnificient final line was the icing on this quite delicious and aethestic poem. Carl.
Ernestine Northover
Smooth and sublime piece of writing. Second verse was really good. Liked it lots.
Smooth and sublime piece of writing. Second verse was really good. Liked it lots.
heterodynemind
Beautiful piece and the ending line is superb.
Beautiful piece and the ending line is superb.
again you've spun a beautiful web of words and blown stardust in our eyes...!