Touch Of Warmth.
By dreaming I reach
............................ the core of your warmth.
Breathing you nightly
................................ keeps me undaunted.
Loads melting, float
........................ weightless within my heart.
My mind drinks your word
.............................. or it becomes parched.
How many sips
...........................will render me thirstless?
Time cannot enliven me
............................................like your verse.
Keeping you near means
........................................my spirit survives.
If this be love, friend,
.................................. then it nets me alive.
sonetta
hhmmm....smells like love....!
hhmmm....smells like love....!
Kerry O'Connor
Keeping you near means my spirit survives - Quite beautiful, Fay.
Keeping you near means my spirit survives - Quite beautiful, Fay.
Susan Jarvis
An intriguing poem, Fay. Beautifully written with heartwarming and vivid images, as ever...but could there be a little more to it than initially meets the eye...an underlying message perhaps - 'Loads melting', 'nets me alive' - it's got me thinking. ;)
An intriguing poem, Fay. Beautifully written with heartwarming and vivid images, as ever...but could there be a little more to it than initially meets the eye...an underlying message perhaps - 'Loads melting', 'nets me alive' - it's got me thinking. ;)
nimal dunuhinga
The warmth of love you touched skillfully.
The warmth of love you touched skillfully.
Frank Lambert
I love a bit of dreaming in unreason and that's where it feels your verse has come from. You know, that place where unreason enlightens? Nice write.
I love a bit of dreaming in unreason and that's where it feels your verse has come from. You know, that place where unreason enlightens? Nice write.
You are very poetic lovely picture wow you have a soft touch indeed