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Missing Heaven

still missing heaven
sitting upon its clouds
as long as I liked
to dwell there
it was very proud

now locked out
feeling quite in hell
as I understand hell
is an empty void
where heaven
does not dwell
inside

Published February 20, 2010 Commenting is closed by the writer
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Michael J. Gale
I personally can only conjecture what Hell might be like? As could anyone else. Heaven I am sure is beautiful and serene. Heaven must be like being in love before the first and next arguments,ever begin. Just kiddin'! LOL! Great poem!
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Munia Khan
Missing heaven leads us to do heavenly things on earth....like reading this poem leads me to flood you with all the praises in this world....Wonderful Poem Sandra.
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