Across Penwith from Carn-les-Beol by Steve Slimm

To Us - Dot.com.

Amazingly woven
These webs of togetherness
Winging the oceans
Laden with line.
Cementing new friendships,
Souls begin meshing
By unseen exchanges
Unsullied by time.

Wonderfully riven
In manifold verses.
Heartfelt or soulful
They speed on their way.
Marking fresh access
To romantic places
Allowing the willing
To have their own say.

Long live the messages
Sent for communing
With beautiful meaning
Our postings of word.
Hearts become closer
By such intercoursing.
Although never speaking
Thoughts always are heard.

Published February 17, 2010 Write a comment
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sonetta
it is amazing isn't it, when i first started i thought i was simply posting my poems....until i got to know you all..... :)
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carol
friends dont have to be seen to be special excllent fay
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stevenstirk
Lovely poem Fay. Technology when used like this, is an absolute delight. The interactions with fellow poets is intriguing and heart warming. When it all started, I thought it was just for the young. Now I'm addicted. To The wholelotofus.co.uk
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Karin Anderson
I will toast to this Fay! New friendships, shared interests, by just clicking a few keys. Your poem like your first line is amazingly woven and I treasure my friendship with you and my other poetical friends too!
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RAJ NANDY
I loved the title you gave to this poem ! True , though we do not chit-chat, we get closer through our poems and our expressed thoughts ! Well said ! -Raj
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Frank James Ryan Jr./FjR
A scape of poetic artistry, propelled by a sumo- injection of imagework, grandeur ...Fay, YOU ROCK ! ~F j R~ 2 0 10
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Susan Jarvis
A mellifluous flow that carries a very special message - from the engaging title to the closing line, this poem is a triumph! :)
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