Twenty-Second Senryu

I think I exist
But it could be in my head
Or possibly yours

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kdarcy
Sweet
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aequilla
Reality s wat we see, wat we feel.. What is
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K R Brandli
Ah perception is reality. Good one Patrick. Pity David stole my thunder....the answer to life, the universe and everything!!!
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Chaos1214
Ha ha... True. We all have our own criteria : D
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LightH2O
Now you got me doubting, I could be imagining I exit and also you? hmm! ... lol
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Frank James Ryan Jr./FjR
That's it, Patrick...Freak me out as I get ready to slip under me sheets, why dont'cha now ! Just because I love to pen dark don't mean I ain't scared of it...lol! Excellent my good friend...And I will trust (from one gael to another) that ya' 'ad 'o rippin' St. Patrick's Day, aye ?! You follow College Hoops? Who do you like for the regional finals? ~FjR~
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Raj Arumugam
clever and witty, Patrick...brings a spontaneous smile...
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Jenny Gordon
Hahaha! I LOVE this one. La, some of my friends love to tease me with this, dunno why. Too beautiful and clever. Don't tell me you're in my head, or how long with you last?
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DavidPaulley
The answer to the ultimate question of life, the universe, and everything...the 42nd haiku will do.
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SaneJustBarely
Ok, you elicited a smile...well done. Your friend in words, Pete
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Gerard Lebel
Do any of us exist? lol Another clever and delightful haiku.....Jerry (*_*)
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Fay Slimm
Ha ha - - I hope you exist or who else writes these fine haikus Patrick. !!!
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Philip
For much more time the Poem is held ...Much longer than the time to compose....A World Record of Forty Seconds > GOLD!
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Sandra Martyres
A clever haiku Patrick
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