Sea of Clouds

Sea of Clouds

Your love came to me
Like a massive waves at sea
I tried to run and flee
But you sweep my heart away

When the day turns to night
I dreamed you’re at my side
We hold each others tight
And dance like fire outright

My love please hear my plea
Open your heart and feel
For the love I felt is real
Like a sea of clouds in hill


By. D.C.D dated 11.02.2010

dahlusion
the love that is conveyed in this piece is simply beautiful and your rhymes are masterful. bravo!!!!!!! peace and light, dah

Simply Bono Razek
wonderful/wonderful ! crazy 'bout that first verse !

 

seema chowdhury
this is so sweet and beautiful. good luck in your love life. take care, pl see my new poems.

Prince Obed de la CRUZ
sweet and really amazing i can tell... rich and deep...

Pink Butterfly
I couldn't describe how beautifully I have imagined the images in this poem... Great piece!!! God bless you!!! -Pink Butterfly-

 

Melvina
Great imagery transposed here, nicely done Desiree.

Karin Anderson
This is just so lovely to read with its sweeping flow and I kept looking at the clouds and the fire in the sun in the picture above your name. I am glad I have read it on this Valentine Day as I feel it is very special.

carol
a sea of love beautiful

Sandra Martyres
A true Valentines Day special....a very soft love poem with a gentle word flow...

Fay Slimm
A poem of flowing love - and just right for Valentine's Day. The title alone paints a picture of poetic worth., and the reference again to the "sea of clouds" in the end line brings the piece together very well.

Frank James Ryan Jr./FjR
Crisp, free-flowing verse...lyrical in tone.Commendable Work,D.C.D. ~F j R~ 2 0 1 0